thats whats up
in 10-14 let me know if you cant drop on time, I can

show me my opponent!

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oh you'll see him alright
you gonna be ready for a thursday drop or not?

i'm cool wit whatever.
if i can, i might drop tonight.

btw, when i said "show me my opponent", thats from a lil wayne song. i knew it was u.

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Look what you rapping is shit so stop acting a bitch
Cuz Untold is what the cops say right after you snitch
You say Im wack, its just I'd hate to be a fag an quote
But didnt you give me 1# punch in the mag YOU wrote?
I DID a legendary battle with Jack, our flow was lethal
All YOU did was bitch piss and moan after he beat you
Blaming Kemp cuz you lost? wow the nerve of this ass
Half the league agreed with him...UN YA VERSE WAS TRASH
Im in a groove son its over your dead..........
YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head
When the Shh!'s in a chick she swallows all of my dick
See hoes call me Jose but they dont call YOU... for shit
Making money eating fools is my hobby
And even though my castrate<--thats exactly what I'll do to your body

sorry tav, i been sick, skool and i think spul tol u about my book situation. lol.

sorry tav, i been meanin to drop, but skools been holdin me back
class had me readin some good text.. cause urs was horribly wack!
yea i'm late! i had skool shit, so i almost left ya alone jerk
'n since ur shit was so pathetic.. i actually WANTED to do my homework
i slay many gays, peeps'll get murdered in many ways
u'll drop the charges.. cause ya couldn't afford them anywayz
this herbs not potent, so i won't be chokin
cuz if Tav-a-rez..
..then this is one rezen bowl i won't be smokin
whore ya corny, so this slaughters mandatory
bitch, i won't tell u ur gonna die.. i'll let the doctor do it for me
ur not honored, even in a court of law ur a disgrace
so i'll make ya catch a case.. of bricks to the side of ya face
'n this battle is close, but i'm more raw wit the four
tav'll think it's a nail biter.. cause i'll be hammerin his jaw to the floor

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Look what you rapping is shit so stop acting a bitch
Cuz Untold is what the cops say right after you snitch
^^lol..
You say Im wack, its just I'd hate to be a fag an quote
But didnt you give me 1# punch in the mag YOU wrote?
^^tru
I DID a legendary battle with Jack, our flow was lethal
All YOU did was bitch piss and moan after he beat you
^^played style
Blaming Kemp cuz you lost? wow the nerve of this ass
Half the league agreed with him...UN YA VERSE WAS TRASH
^^lol
Im in a groove son its over your dead..........
YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head
^^lmfao
When the Shh!'s in a chick she swallows all of my dick
See hoes call me Jose but they dont call YOU... for shit
^^meh
Making money eating fools is my hobby
And even though my castrate<--thats exactly what I'll do to your body
^^iight


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sorry tav, i been meanin to drop, but skools been holdin me back
class had me readin some good text.. cause urs was horribly wack!
^^meh
yea i'm late! i had skool shit, so i almost left ya alone jerk
'n since ur shit was so pathetic.. i actually WANTED to do my homework
^^meh
i slay many gays, peeps'll get murdered in many ways
u'll drop the charges.. cause ya couldn't afford them anywayz
^^meh
this herbs not potent, so i won't be chokin
cuz if Tav-a-rez..
..then this is one rezen bowl i won't be smokin
^^lol
whore ya corny, so this slaughters mandatory
bitch, i won't tell u ur gonna die.. i'll let the doctor do it for me
^^no
ur not honored, even in a court of law ur a disgrace
so i'll make ya catch a case.. of bricks to the side of ya face
^^lol
'n this battle is close, but i'm more raw wit the four
tav'll think it's a nail biter.. cause i'll be hammerin his jaw to the floor
^^coo


V/tav



IMO came harder




gd luck

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Axe

You say Im wack, its just I'd hate to be a fag an quote
But didnt you give me 1# punch in the mag YOU wrote?
I DID a legendary battle with Jack, our flow was lethal
All YOU did was bitch piss and moan after he beat you
Im in a groove son its over your dead..........
YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head

vs.

i slay many gays, peeps'll get murdered in many ways
u'll drop the charges.. cause ya couldn't afford them anywayz
whore ya corny, so this slaughters mandatory
bitch, i won't tell u ur gonna die.. i'll let the doctor do it for me

This really was a close battle. Both came with some good lines but it felt like if neither side tried as hard as I know they could. N.Tavs openner to me was not really good coz of the way it was worded but he still had some ill lines to pick it up after. He also used a few good personals that you'd only feel if you followed the events of the league. Untold, ...I could tell this battle really wasn't on your mind man... It felt like if you rushed your verse too much to get it done. YOur Text line would have been tight if you would have wrote it better fam. Same with the catch a case line and the nameplay line. good effort though but in my view N.Tav got this battle by a lil bit.

V/ N.tav

RTF in my battle with Euthanize ma niggaz.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

good battle untold


http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3073441
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3073442
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3073443
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3073444

Untold-this herbs not potent, so i won't be chokin
cuz if Tav-a-rez..
..then this is one rezen bowl i won't be smokin
ur not honored, even in a court of law ur a disgrace
so i'll make ya catch a case.. of bricks to the side of ya face

Tavarez-Im in a groove son its over your dead..........
YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head

Look what you rapping is shit so stop acting a bitch
Cuz Untold is what the cops say right after you snitch

This battle was pretty spicyy i give the slight edge to N.
Vote-N. Tavarez

good battle, tav.

btw, that groove line had me lmfaoo..

still, upz for more votes peoplez.

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You say Im wack, its just I'd hate to be a fag an quote
But didnt you give me 1# punch in the mag YOU wrote?
I DID a legendary battle with Jack, our flow was lethal
All YOU did was bitch piss and moan after he beat you
LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL, you knew i'd love this one
Im in a groove son its over your dead..........
YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head
(3)

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this herbs not potent, so i won't be chokin
cuz if Tav-a-rez..
..then this is one rezen bowl i won't be smokin
^^I'm not quoting this, I just want you to know I used this concept soooooooooooo much better
whore ya corny, so this slaughters mandatory
bitch, i won't tell u ur gonna die.. i'll let the doctor do it for me
Fucking ill
'n this battle is close, but i'm more raw wit the four
tav'll think it's a nail biter.. cause i'll be hammerin his jaw to the floor
(2)

Eh, ya this was pretty close, I was hoping you guys'd go a bunch of lines more, have like a 30 liner, that woulda been illyness. But word, I gotta give this to Tavarez

v/Tav

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