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09-09-06, 02:24 PM | #1 | |||||||
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NEW SPuL & Enygma!! "Loose Cannon" HOLLA!!! (GUARANTEED RTF!!!)
IP: 361B 3B93
word me and my Nygga rippin' up track. YEA!!!
www.soundclick.com/spul First verse: Enygma Second verse: SPuL Hook: SPuL/Enygma Third verse: Enygma Fourth verse: SPuL Beat: "Renegade" by Jay-Z ft. Eminem LINKS: 1. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234691 2. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234643 Why leave feed? Cuz we some motherfuckin' loose cannons!!!
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09-09-06, 03:26 PM | #2 | ||||||
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ok its like enygma is jay and spul is eminem but this time em doesn t kill jay hmmm interesting combo but i liked this shit no doubt specially the back and forth
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09-10-06, 12:48 AM | #3 | |||||||
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IP: 361B 3B93
^word thanks yo..... uppp
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09-10-06, 02:06 AM | #4 | ||||||
Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
Allways liked this beat, gonna be hard to impress me using this beat, seen as orignal track is solid like wwwwwhaaaaaaaat!!!!!
Enygma has some decent rhymes, quality doesnt sound the best, dubs are good. Flows on point, emotion remains a bit monotone, when you spit "I need some anger management" it sounds rushed/out of breath, just is slightly off flow, but still solid, feeling the rhymes, were you stop started recorded when you spit " whos smarting off spitting off the walls" You can tell you have re-started recording there, (if im wrong my bad, but you have definitly done somthing there cause you can definitly hear the diffrence in vocals. Spul comes in cool, bit more mellow and smooth, solid rhymes aswell, flows decent,dubs are perfect, overall decent verse. Hooks cool, would of worked better if both parts were recorded at the same setup, cause the diffrence in production some what takes away the effect of what the hook could of been........... yeh, kinda sick of track so thats the feed from me |
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09-10-06, 11:28 AM | #5 | |||||||
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IP: 60E9 71D0
^lmao thanks for that atleast foo
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09-11-06, 10:33 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 60E9 71D0
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09-11-06, 03:08 PM | #7 | |||||||
The Most Feared Gang!
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Aight listenin...
Enygma...too be honest wasnt feeling this as much how I thought I would...flow is decent and str8..I jus aint feeling the delivery and presence here..breath is a lil off but its still decent just think you could still do better.. Spul..flipped it this is one of ya better verses fam..quality was near perfect...flow was hot feelin the jumpy style...real energetic ..delivery. was hot.. Hook..yeah this was hot liked how yall delivered it.. Enygma..you did much better in this 2nd one...im feeling it...flow is workin and delivery been stepped up... Spul..your second one ssame ass verse still nice flow..lyrics are nice fammo...can hear u much better.. Hook im feeling alot...nice jawn
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09-11-06, 04:18 PM | #8 | ||||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Word......we shit on mics
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09-11-06, 04:38 PM | #9 | ||||
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1st Verse - flow is on point......lyrics are dope......all da basics are covered here in this verse......yea i'm feelin this verse....
2nd Verse - flow is strate........feelin wut ya sayin in this verse........yep basics covered too in this Hook - shit is nice, get's point across....."damn, im juss a loose cannon" like how ya deliverd that sounded like a cannon shot...... 3rd Verse - juss like above everythings on point 4th Verse - ya ridin the beat real well betta than ya above verse....feelin this verse more than ya first one.... Overall - yo this shit is hot.......but imma say Enygma came harder before 1st hook, then Spul took it after tha hook.......hot track...... rtf please: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=234819 pz ~1~ |
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09-12-06, 05:17 PM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 4A17 DF07
thanks for feed. uppppppp
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09-17-06, 01:06 PM | #11 | |||||||
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IP: 00A5 80D2
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09-17-06, 01:55 PM | #12 | |||||||
Better THAN You!
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IP: 86B7 EC1C
Peace said it, I love this Track so Impressing me is gonna be hard.
Verse 1/2 - I'm loving the delivery and presence, the scheme is kinda weird but I get the flow and it's pretty good the way it flows.. I actually like this part... the transition in flow was pretty cool..I love second guy's flow...shits crazy.. Hook - Pretty good...I like the feel of it..needs a little more emotion sounds like it's missing something..which takes away from it... Verse 3/4- Man..for some reason this song seems to long to me...I don't know why.. It's not the time, it just seems liek it's drawn out a little...But the flow transition is fucking crazy..lol..I love Second guys delivery and first guys emotion.. Overall its a nice track.. RTF Please http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=235025
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