Ok thanks for the votes............................

__________________

Sane-you took this pic nice..i liked where u were going with it..nice vocab
nice emotion and ya imagery was on point...u slightly edged this one out

Sin-vocab was was on point, u flipped the words nicely,fit in spots perfect
your imagery could have been upped...but i was feelin absolutely no emotion
and thats really all a topical is about

V/ sane
for slightly edging this out

__________________

Well weather i win or loose i know im elevating and props to sane for all the votes.......

__________________

Ill be back next season !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

__________________

i think sane's drop sucked personally, it was very stop and go and all in all the entire thing bored me ... it felt like it took forever to hit the end. sin's was much more fluent, in terms of actual flow aswell as contectually. sin took a more poetic approach so i found his lines to much more creative and interesting, while again, sane's just bored the fuck out of me, i really struggled to even finish reading it becuase it just wasnt doing anything.

vote - sin

See if everyone dident no show id have a chance....

__________________