check, sup DTH? Im going about 10 lines or so man.

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we'll make this short but go more than 10.. maybe like 14-16 or so

k. I'll try to drop either to day or tomorrow if I remember. g'luck fam. 1

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Gimme a tough match, when i'm near, bitches will hurt
I rise to challenges...
... n' right now I'm just here sittin' at work
I always get hyped up n' I'm the best u can see
And the Word on the street...
...is not AT ALL a threat to the league
I've read all ur shit n' it lacks the deep flavor
Ya verse musta been made in China...
... it looks like it was produced by cheap labor
Word u be queer, but to elevate, just see here
U better work out ya legs...
... cuz u win just about once every leap year
Now sometimes I fuck up my text n' it sucks dude
I gotta use Wyte out...
... ur just losin' to that wack newb in 1-2

extension needed. only for about 2 hours or so fam. coz Im on pacific time and its 3 hours time difference out here so by the time I get home shits already almost closed out. just give me a lil time to match.

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I see your in the fight, but dawg, heres where you reach limits
'Coz Datrus was well known---->even before I toss'd him deep in it
You need lyrics for real man, I can tell your struggling to better me
Even your computers a bitch ...I would'nt drop a penny for the legacy (leg I See)
this kids deadly? please... I'll power rank em through the ground quick
Son stepped on a box, when I asked him to do a roundhouse kick
I'll make em inspectah deck for his teath, and it aint a shock
'Coz even the Wu dont believe you'll Reakwon in against AhGod (rake one)
you just a slob, this bitch dont deserve to contend in his spot
How's DTH top 10? ....When he'd rather have the 10 on top

10 quick lines. g'luck DTH man. lets stay up in this league fam.

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Up over no-shows.

boo @ Trus using the 3 lines style...

you dont use it correctly!

I always get hyped up n' I'm the best u can see
And the Word on the street...
...is not AT ALL a threat to the league
I've read all ur shit n' it lacks the deep flavor
Ya verse musta been made in China...
... it looks like it was produced by cheap labor
Now sometimes I fuck up my text n' it sucks dude
I gotta use Wyte out...
... ur just losin' to that wack newb in 1-2
Eh this one was kinda like the shit Ab0ve used against me this week with the flagrant line

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you just a slob, this bitch dont deserve to contend in his spot
How's DTH top 10? ....When he'd rather have the 10 on top
I'll make em inspectah deck for his teath, and it aint a shock
'Coz even the Wu dont believe you'll Reakwon in against AhGod (rake one)
This along with the Legacy line both are played as fuck along the terms of wordplay but it was alright so i quoted it not great, but alright

v/ DTH obviously

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Gimme a tough match, when i'm near, bitches will hurt
I rise to challenges...
... n' right now I'm just here sittin' at work

^^lol mad funny


Word u be queer, but to elevate, just see here
U better work out ya legs...
... cuz u win just about once every leap year


wordz ahgod

this kids deadly? please... I'll power rank em through the ground quick
Son stepped on a box, when I asked him to do a roundhouse kick

^good idea not really feeling it to much tho

you actually had good ideas...juss gotta word em better..datrushurtz took this

vote-datrushurtz

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Gimme a tough match, when i'm near, bitches will hurt
I rise to challenges...
... n' right now I'm just here sittin' at work
I always get hyped up n' I'm the best u can see
And the Word on the street...
...is not AT ALL a threat to the league
Word u be queer, but to elevate, just see here
U better work out ya legs...
... cuz u win just about once every leap year

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this kids deadly? please... I'll power rank em through the ground quick
Son stepped on a box, when I asked him to do a roundhouse kick

this was a little one sided in my opinion. "legacy / leg I see" wordplay was gay, and "Raekwon / rake one" came across as forced to me. trus didn't drop his best, but he came with a pretty consistent verse. I wasn't feeling the "cheap labour" line, and your closer was alright - just nothing to too special - but apart from that it was cool.

v/ DTH.