dont tell me that homo no showed after all that shit talk


?????

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he PMed me saying he was at hosptial for some ish and he'd be back today. so let's see =/

but word @ this track hitting #1 on disses chart, and #56 overall.

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hahaha intro was raw as fuck, lmao ..... nice beat... Made you look... kinda feelin the "KING MEEEE"

Verse 1: this flow is aight, but i just dont like ur delivery on this shit...... some of the lines are decent, but u have some played ones.... we can tell ur hype about this shit, ok first verse

hook: im really likin this shit..... nice way to flip it "wheres my crown at" was nice

Verse 2: WAY more lyricall..... GOD DAMN... some of these lines are raw, but i still dont like ur delivery... but these two lines were raw...

Yo I hate to break Jaws.... but your name, J. Summers
Is sooo last season, that I'm makin' J. Fall

Kid, you ain't fire. Rap hasn't look forward
To J. Summers, since fuckin' Jigga retired

heavy disses and nice wordplay..... i also like the outro... clever

good shit overall...... well mixed and everythin

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

^word man appreciate it

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OK..now that intro was jus hilarious yall took that chipmunk shit to the next level LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!....ok first verse flow comes in strong u use alot of callbacks in ya flow...u used too many its great for battle cuz u can throw alot of words in btw the rhymes but gets repetitive..delivery had nice energy...liked addlibs....second verse same as first flow wise jus lyrically WAYYY harder....u had sum ouch lines...but also had sum played shit throughout this battle...lyrically inconsistent but the lines that hit..HIT HARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!like DAYUM!!!!!

Ouch lines:

Dude, wait... King of the North?
Fuck a coast, kid, you ain't even King of your State

Your weak, I tell your, girl "yo honey, you nude yet?"
Cuz losing's a bitch, and the only one you'll get

You reppin' Alanson, kid. That just shows that you wack
But congrats, on being King, where nobody raps!<-----BIGT OUCH!!!!!that stung

I'll leave your group with a knife to their neck right
Cuz it's a Breeze beating Summers, like your sex life<----OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yo I hate to break Jaws.... but your name, J. Summers
Is sooo last season, that I'm makin' J. Fall<-----GOD DAYUM!!!!!!


Those lines right there overhand rights to the jaw fo real....good shit....1

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^word thanks man up

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MAYBE a little more?

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man i'm really liking your flow at the start, really confident shit...really liking this, better than anything i've heard from jsumms by far...good shit, pretty lyrical, and nice scheme.

kobe lines was funny...
where nobody raps...hahahahahahaahhahahaahhahahahhaahha
i thought you killed this beat, and thats hard to do after nas...shit was fire.
really like the hook play off

intro was aight, little long

really good quality.

1st verse was the best in my opinion, shit was solid though...

real good.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237290

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^word thanks for the feed man. apprecaite it

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ayo on the real man this was HOTT!!!!

hahaha..this was one of the best disses i heard on RV..next to Apexx battle to Zone Out and Ike's diss to Status..

lyrics were bananas..you hit dude with so many damn punches..flow was real simple..the weird thing was that your voice sounded real comical...but it was cool

i dont know what else to say..im jus hopin that J.Summers wont respond..but if he does..he better take his time to write it..


RTF IN MY SIG.

N yea
Im listening
intro is classic LOL
@ lmao if he sounded like that.
Flow is ok... Ur voice is unique but is coo...
Ummm, Da Punchlines is coo
Lupe Line was decent
N overall a good diss track..

keep @ it.
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D.Julien

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You are bogus... I want to hear the response, but the 'king where nobody raps' line was too wrong hahaaaaaa. And I'm coo with both of y'all but goodness, the 'f* a coast, you ain't even King of your State' line was nice and of course the J Fall line... good job SPuL, nice job on the adlibs too, that King Me part still stuck in my head. Stay up
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well.....damn, j summers ain't shot back yet????

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this guy lost all credibility that his crew for some reason gave him....

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