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Old 11-13-06, 10:45 AM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
I Hurt.
 
Group C: DaTrusHurtz (2-1) vs. Tha Don of Mics (0-0)

IP: 2AC9 5FB1

Its week 4 of this 7 week season. We're gonna be past the midseason mark after this week so win here and get yourself in a good position for the playoffs. Last week the quality in punches was definately lacking so I'm hoping to see some improvement this week. You get to feed, punching should be easy!

Battler #1: Tha Don of Mics
Battler #2: DaTrusHurtz

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding is allowed AND encouraged!
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.
- Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now.

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Old 11-13-06, 02:36 PM   #2
DaTrusHurtz
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you wanted this match.. you got it
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Old 11-13-06, 09:41 PM   #3
Cola
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lol..n your pussyin ass makes me drop first...dont matter...i'm just checkin in..

be back in a while wif my bar
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Old 11-13-06, 10:17 PM   #4
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Tha ONLY way this bitch could hope to "blow up spitz" is if i slit his throat open and "fillied it with gas",
..... and isntead of a "towel" I "Threw-In-The-Match"/
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Old 11-15-06, 04:55 PM   #5
DaTrusHurtz
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be back in a while wif my bar

Ya stayed true to ya words, I'm glad u persisted
And did come Wif ur bar...
... and made ^^ that motion with it
Threw the match? Ur a free win, n' u've already declined
People celebrate gettin' TD so much, the NFL is levyin' fines
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Old 11-15-06, 09:25 PM   #6
Cola
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Yea, u still need a lotta work.. maybe you'll be good someday, but right now ur stuff is kinda corny and played.


Ya punchlines so weak~maybe ya should "touch-down to earth"
N i'm leaving ya "stuck" onto my bars worse..
...than alcoholics after work
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Old 11-15-06, 09:37 PM   #7
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Old 11-15-06, 09:49 PM   #8
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Don had the dopest punch, with the throw in the match line, but came straight ass in that second bar. Trus stayed consistent, nothing real hard hitting, but a couple of decent punches beats a dope n' whack one.

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Old 11-15-06, 10:20 PM   #9
Adam
 
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This battle pissed me off after I read it, it was easily one sided..

Tha_Don_of_Mics..
Tha ONLY way this bitch could hope to "blow up spitz" is if i slit his throat open and "fillied it with gas",
..... and isntead of a "towel" I "Threw-In-The-Match"/
This is whack.. first off the build up to the punch is streched too shit and it sounds noobish as fuck. The punchline isn't even good, it sounds like a punch line that would come out of a 14 year old weiner who just joined the site.. weak..
Ya punchlines so weak~maybe ya should "touch-down to earth"
N i'm leaving ya "stuck" onto my bars worse..
...than alcoholics after work
No, this was the most simplistic wordplay, not feeling it, if you were trying to feed off his TD line, it didn't work..

/Why you using ""? People in this league aren't stupid.. and couple words of advice.. when-you-use-dashes-between your punches, it doesn't mean that they actually connect.


DaTrusHurtz..
Ya stayed true to ya words, I'm glad u persisted
And did come Wif ur bar...
... and made ^^ that motion with it
Nice feed, I like it..
Threw the match? Ur a free win, n' u've already declined
People celebrate gettin' TD so much, the NFL is levyin' fines
Nice nameplay, good punch..

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Old 11-16-06, 12:40 AM   #10
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V/Datrus

TD first punch was bad setup, a played concept but if it the setup was better I thought it could of been a decent punch

Your 2nd punch was to played and wack, sorry man you gotta bring what ppl haven't brought to this league with new punches, not the olds.

vs.

Honestly, i read over your first punch a few times awile and Don't get it. wif? like a sniff? dont get it mad. but w/e. your 2nd punch to me is what got the win.
easy nameplay but you fliped it pretty good and made it nice.

v/dth
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Old 11-16-06, 09:44 AM   #11
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Ya punchlines so weak~maybe ya should "touch-down to earth"
N i'm leaving ya "stuck" onto my bars worse..
...than alcoholics after work
ALKY BARS ARE VERY PLAYED SO NOT A GOOD CLOSER


Tha ONLY way this bitch could hope to "blow up spitz" is if i slit his throat open and "fillied it with gas",
..... and isntead of a "towel" I "Threw-In-The-Match"/
THIS TYPE OF BARS USUALLY ARE PLAYED TOO BUT YOU DID A DECENT FLIP ON IT
I WOULD SUGGEST NOT USING "'S AND /'S IN YA STRUCTURE CUZ IT OBSTRUCTS THE READ, GOOD BATTLERS WILL GET IT IF YOU WORD IT RIGHT

VS


Ya stayed true to ya words, I'm glad u persisted
And did come Wif ur bar...
... and made ^^ that motion with it
I HAD TO READ THIS A COUPLE TIMES, I SEE YOUR VISION BUT THE WORDING REALLY THROWS THE BAR OFF
Threw the match? Ur a free win, n' u've already declined
People celebrate gettin' TD so much, the NFL is levyin' fines
GOOD BAR WE ALL KNOW TD BARS ARE PLAYED BUT A GOOD ENOUGH FLIP

DTH CAME DECENT DON HAS POTENTIAL IF HE AVOIDS PLAYED CONCEPTS AND TAKES AWAY SYMBOLS FROM HIS BARS
V/ DTH
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Old 11-17-06, 09:00 AM   #12
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Ya punchlines so weak~maybe ya should "touch-down to earth"
N i'm leaving ya "stuck" onto my bars worse..
...than alcoholics after work
^^
played, and how is being stuck onto someones bars a diss?
Tha ONLY way this bitch could hope to "blow up spitz" is if i slit his throat open and "fillied it with gas",
..... and isntead of a "towel" I "Threw-In-The-Match"/
^^
real simple and tirrible structure
vs.
Ya stayed true to ya words, I'm glad u persisted
And did come Wif ur bar...
... and made ^^ that motion with it
^^^
liked this bar
Threw the match? Ur a free win, n' u've already declined
People celebrate gettin' TD so much, the NFL is levyin' fines
^^
didn't like this, but still decent

vote-dth
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Old 11-17-06, 06:42 PM   #13
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word to DTH for the win...hope we can do it again soon....

i'm not gonna post links...but i'll go n vote...cuz you already won this one...
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Old 11-17-06, 07:12 PM   #14
DaTrusHurtz
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word, good match man
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Old 11-18-06, 12:22 AM   #15
Spektikul
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Tha ONLY way this bitch could hope to "blow up spitz" is if i slit his throat open and "fillied it with gas",
..... and isntead of a "towel" I "Threw-In-The-Match"/

Weak opener, didnt actually hit Trus.

VS

Ya stayed true to ya words, I'm glad u persisted
And did come Wif ur bar...
... and made ^^ that motion with it

haha, original punch, not the hardest but it was still good.

Threw the match? Ur a free win, n' u've already declined
People celebrate gettin' TD so much, the NFL is levyin' fines

LOL, nice flip to dons punch. good job.

Ya punchlines so weak~maybe ya should "touch-down to earth"
N i'm leaving ya "stuck" onto my bars worse..
...than alcoholics after work

You came in here with a good concept, but again, failed to throw it in a punch form at Trus, this was really weak dude.

Trus took this one easily, Dons gotta step his game up if hes gunna get anywhere in the league. Props to both for actually droppin tho. GL in the votes.

V/Trus
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