This is My newest Track Called.....If Ya Hatin

Ill have my two post soon so dont delete please

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One Love

*Bridging The Rap*

Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

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One Love

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Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

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Aii uppin for Advice or comments ....Persoanlly i thnk i did good until towards the end but I freesyld the last verse jus been stupid lol

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lol @ u putting the links in two separate posts

auyo...u sound balck.GOOD..finally some niggas on this board


Wassup with the start of ur verse? are u talkin or is that the hook?


nigga please


come on


ur flow sound slike ur mumblin a bit


decent at best'

but u need to elevate in that area dawg




keep em comin tho and elevate

I'd like to hear more from u


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I Am Black .....LOL.................Yeah Check out my Myspace Man I Am black and from the South Thanx for the advice ....I dropped this track in like 10 minutes so I wasnt expecting any good Comments seriously but thanx

Yeah I was Talkin in the begining But I Also Added the hook in the background which was a bad move I must say ...THanx though man


uppin for more replies

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One Love

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Maybe A Bump Here ....................................

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Your vocals are low as fuck man.....I really can't hear what you're saying, so I guess I won't comment that much......sorry man

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I know man Ima Redo It ...................................

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Listening.......
um.. i think this is the hook.... you sound like your downsyndrom... sound like ya not enjoying what your doing at all.
Your adlibs are louder than ya vocals.. same with ya dubs, you have recorded dubs and adlibs on the same track. ussually not a good choice.

from what i can hear in ya lyrics they simple as fuck, allmost sounds free'd its that simple.
personally not feeling it bro.. btu yeh, maybe with more mixing technics it would be better.
stay learning.

wow...........................this is bad..................................quality sucks ass.........
flow is non existant........delvery aint there either......lyrics r way too simple....and lower than gary coleman.......beat just str8 sucked.....hook was terrible.......this was not a good piece everything coulda been upped........eleavte and keep droppin just mabe practise a bit more b4 dropin

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I here ya ............

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One Love

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Stanza Productions *Dem City Boys*

i aint neva heard nuh'in from you...hmmm lets see

beat isnt my steez and to be honest wichu i dont like it..this be for the hataz i was expecting something more WARlike!

your vocals are MAD low..and ur adlibs are louder than your actual vocals which aint a usual thing!..nah ah!

this is for the hataz you shud be more mean with ur emotion...it sounds like you got some loose talk for the haters rapped like this!

delivery is lacking pretty much cos i cant get most of what u saying!


o mayne :-( this is boring...and its taking long to finish..


i wasnt feeling this yo to be sincere with you!...nah...

i think you shud change your emotion and spit with a harder voice and turn up your vocals and remember to eq...thats all i gotta say!


hit my sig plz..thanx

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