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Old 01-14-07, 12:01 PM   #1
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29. J. Wizzle (0-0) vs. 30. Gay Bear (0-0)

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Old 01-14-07, 02:08 PM   #2
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Rotfl @ Me Battlin' Him When He Ducked Me 3423 Times On Rb.

Check, 14 Lines.
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Old 01-15-07, 09:39 PM   #3
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14 it is.......
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Old 01-18-07, 11:47 PM   #4
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Kid claims he’s gay.. a plan to get attention.. but no one will stare
Bear aint just his name.. he also likes Bear Hugs n’ seein’ men Bear
Ill beat your fuckin’ face in.. nothin’ left.. bruised n’ limbs hangin’
Shit.. Ill have GB so Black n’ Blue.. the Packers’ll start gang bangin’
I rock cool kicks.. my feet shine son.. laced up.. yeah.. it’s a trend
Last time he saw Air Forces Stompin’.. he was on the recievin’ end
This little kid thinks he’s quick.. but hes slow.. cant pass my section
But he was usiin’ Light Years.. till he lost his Toy Story collection
You’re stupid son.. im the smart one in this battle.. im causin’ harm
He’s the only retard that had a heart attack.. n’ got shot in the arm
Son.. you aren’t livin’ large.. you’re poor as fuck.. cant afford meds
Last time you were around stars.. we were wishin’ you were *dead*
Your gunna no show n’ lose.. lmfao.. im funny.. ill break your mouth
Cuz you wont lose by a hair.. but ill have you pullin’ all yours out
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Old 01-20-07, 05:01 AM   #5
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I am the run of the mill, while you just a chip off the block
But Wizz got skills...I mean he's known for pissing me off
So I'm late, but you ain't a Mountain to shit, its a cold fact
N I ain't talking about me, when someone got a Brokeback
Fat fuck is hungry, but dammit I am just sick of the beef
This dude's a Wizz...and still dropping Shit in the league
But look here, you know gay, but look at this in a new way
N everyone's flicking you the bird....cause your verse BlueJ
But the truth is the casket's waiting, bitch enough's been said
RV don't need your service...unless it's one where you're dead

Here's 10 cause DTH asked me too.
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Old 01-20-07, 01:43 PM   #6
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Cool, Votes Please.
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Old 01-20-07, 06:33 PM   #7
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yeah please votes
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Old 01-20-07, 06:53 PM   #8
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J.Wizzle:

"I rock cool kicks.. my feet shine son.. laced up.. yeah.. it’s a trend
Last time he saw Air Forces Stompin’.. he was on the recievin’ end"

Vs.

GayBear:

"But look here, you know gay, but look at this in a new way
N everyone's flicking you the bird....cause your verse BlueJ"

This battle was equal skill wise, but it wasn't really a hard
hitting battle. Wizzle, your verse had some fillers, and
misworded and bad concepts. The quote I picked out from you
was the only one that really even connected in my opinion.
For GayBear, your verse was the same way, a lot of fillers but
then you had this decent concept..

Vote - GayBear, it came down to those two quoteables I picked out
and to me GayBear's was more personal and actually original. I've
seen the Air Force line before and it really not a personal punch
considering you could use it on anyone..good battle though, keep
dropping good shit you two.
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Old 01-20-07, 10:27 PM   #9
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I got Gay edging this...

J's opener was okay... but worded poorly. The follow-up was decent. Air Forces was pretty cool. Light Years was ehh. Shot in the arm was pretty lame. Stars was terribly flipped. Hair was a bit played but cool enough.

Gay's opener was decent, but i could see it being played. Brokeback was lame. Shit/wizz was okay, but you just used a Wizz thing in the opener so it took away from the impact. BlueJ was cool, but it's been used a lot on people with J/jay in their names. Closer was played.


Gay was more consistent and although not that fresh his punches connected a lot better.
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Old 01-21-07, 11:08 AM   #10
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2-0

Gay Bear WINS 1-0
J. Wizzle LOSES 0-1
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