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Old 02-07-07, 04:48 AM   #1
crazyboysoki
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I am COCAINE!!!

IP: AE5B A168

yo! my flows are goin straight up your nose, like cocaine!
damagine your brain, im insane! my lyrics get you high as a jet plane,
roll the blunt and light the flame. inhale em to your lungs,
these lyrics mixed wit thes drugs kills more people than guns!
ill warn you im BAD, but you choose to find out the hard way and thats SAD!
im crazier than you think, i have you feelin dizzy and throwin up in the sink,
till your face turn pink!
you can tell that you high by the way that your eyes is chinked!
youve been awake for three days and you aint even blinked!
ill ruin your whole lifestyle,
and when you scratchin out your eyeballs i cant help but smile.
cause ive became your everything, all that you know,
i tried to warn you about that BLOW!
Yo! im white as snow! bust twelve lines and go! to an andre nikatina show!
like whoa!
think you got me under control, when all you really doin is dyin slow!
look. my rymes so good got you like a fish thats hooked!
and i wont stop reelin you IN, till you either dead or in the PEN...atentury,
your weak little bodys my sanctuary. aint it scary?
you used to be hairy, now your losen all your hair inside the library.
in front of some hott girls, wit blonde curls,
too late homeboy this is the end of your world! YOUR DEAD!!!!!!

NO LINKS NO FEEDBACK!! PM ME OR WILLA UR LINKS IF U WISH FOR THIS TO BE RE-OPENED

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Old 02-07-07, 04:51 AM   #2
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hey everybody please give me all the critcism yall got im just startin out in the whole rap game and need to know what im doin right and what im doin wrong. thanks for checkin it out and i hope you liked it!
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Old 02-11-07, 11:01 PM   #3
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flow was cool the lyrics werent really catchin me cuz they were just a bunch of lines that kinda went together like yea seems like battle verse type but i dunno sumtin about it
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Old 02-12-07, 12:49 AM   #4
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I wasnt feel'n dis shit son, step up ya game b
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Old 02-12-07, 10:34 AM   #5
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Yo...u need to work on ur flow and ur punchlines...u need some more skill dawg
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