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Old 02-25-07, 05:18 PM   #1
M the Literal
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They Call Me...

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Goofy lines.
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They call me M the Literal, an essential mineral
Take one a day - and already you are feeling full
Steady - calling out for Daphne and Freddy
High as a kite, so you turn on the tele
What can I say? It's Cartoon Network
Get me some munchies, but nothin' that requires forks
And nothing endorsed by dorks talking 'bout orcs in the store
Finger-food galore
I don't need those pencil-necked geeks
"Classy" Freddie Blassie beats 'em up for weeks on end
He was once my friend
Then he threw acid in my face, turned it red
Now we're enemies
No more amenities
Trinity of cage brawls, two out of three
And after all of it - who's the winner?
The master harasser, it's me, the lyric spinner


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Old 02-26-07, 11:13 AM   #2
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i dunno wat to even say bout this shit, but okay... jus fuccin round round? cool brah..
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Old 02-27-07, 08:20 AM   #3
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this is some crazee ass shit iiked it slight breakdow but utha thn tht twas klkl bra keep it goin
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Old 03-02-07, 06:10 PM   #4
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lol it may be because im tired but that shit had me crackin up for real...it seems hmm ok i guess...the line that cracked me up was the opening lines...aim to be more complex in your flow and you'll get there in the end...the originality was on and off
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