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Old 04-22-07, 07:59 AM   #1
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Week 3: Big Picture 2-0 .vs. TonyTone 2-0

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Sunday: Battles are setup
Wednesday Night: Big Picture 1 bar
Thursday Night: TonyTone 2 bars
Friday Night: Big Picture 1 bar
Sunday Morning: Battles close

Feeding is allowed, and will be optional
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Old 04-22-07, 03:50 PM   #2
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yea...............
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Old 04-22-07, 05:34 PM   #3
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tonytone aint mackin dimes.. kid gets what he can and says thanks
yeaahhhahaha......
........so dudes got two ton's in his name and the same on his dates
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Old 04-22-07, 05:51 PM   #4
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come as soon as u can, and popcorn can't vote in this battle
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Old 04-23-07, 01:52 AM   #5
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Peep the pics.....
It aint even pronounced Ton's dumbass n im 6 ft 155 lb, jerk
You need to learn how to let it go......my dick's startin ta hurt
I seen ya bitch n heard a bit, guess yal havin relations
What a Catch, i gotta say
...............u must hav some HORRIBLE hand-eye coordination
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Old 04-23-07, 06:33 PM   #6
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Peep the pics.....
It aint even pronounced Ton's dumbass n im 6 ft 155 lb, jerk
You need to learn how to let it go......my dick's startin ta hurt


i was sayin your dates are fat not your skinny ass... but this is good
cuz know i can break this twig quicker than if i snuck up in the woods

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aight lets get some VOTES YA'LL
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Old 04-23-07, 10:20 PM   #7
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wow kind of weak here.


wasn't really feelin either's punches

Tony-first one, was ok..worded ok, but in general dick lines are played. and weak in my opinion, but the way you followed through with it with the 2nd bar was ok. Although in my opinion the 2nd bar was worded badly. i still got the concept. Weak here, nothin really that stood out.


Big-i've seen you do better then this. i really didn't like ya first punch man, Seems like you tried to hard as far as wording it, and slippin in the concept. 2nd bar was meh as well, not really that great of wordplay. Overall concept was weak as well.


v/tony by a small margin, both dropped weak once again.
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Old 04-23-07, 10:26 PM   #8
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Big your first punch was weak......2cd punch was mehish.......Tony both of your punches were mehish.......close but V/TT for better creativity
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Old 04-24-07, 10:30 PM   #9
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up..... for cooler votes
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Old 04-24-07, 11:34 PM   #10
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big picture...pretty funny first punch...it made me chuckle

tone...your my bretheren homie....but that first bar was pretty played...and not much of a personal at all....i wasn't feelin' it
2nd punch much better...my favorite of the battle so far

big picture...2nd bar was weak..if your gonna feed, make sure you do it well...otherwise it works against you...

vote goes to tone...pretty close battle though
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Old 04-25-07, 12:31 PM   #11
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i honestly dont see where yall are seeing that tony won...

granted this was a very weak battle and i expected more i still feel as if big won this. tony your first bar is the most played concept EVER..its been around longer then you..big both of yours were rather weak although at least there was a lil originality there

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Old 04-25-07, 03:09 PM   #12
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hmm

weak battle

big picture:

you worded your shit poorly. could of came off bigger. but the wording was horrible. sall good though alwayz time to improve. The punch didnt really hit. and that " yeahhahaha" part just ruined your whole first line. So overall i give this 1.5/5

Tony Tone:

your wasnt much better but you edged this out due to an attempt at a clever line. But you shouldn't come at a nigga with callin him a jerk. that word just doesnt diss nobody but yourself. umm the second line was a lil better. overall i give this a 1.9/5

Tony tone gets my vote
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Old 04-25-07, 03:29 PM   #13
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is his second bar playin off "what a catch" as in my girl is a "catch"?
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Old 04-25-07, 08:47 PM   #14
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yes or "great catch" whichever term you might've heard
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Old 04-25-07, 09:33 PM   #15
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Round 1
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Big Picture:
tonytone aint mackin dimes.. kid gets what he can and says thanks
yeaahhhahaha......
........so dudes got two ton's in his name and the same on his dates
Ok, this was funny, hella stretched though. The "yeeaeaehhh" shit was very unneccesary, fucked up the punch. 1/2

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TonyTone
It aint even pronounced Ton's dumbass n im 6 ft 155 lb, jerk
You need to learn how to let it go......my dick's startin ta hurt
Decent misdirection. Didn't seem very harsh, but still, the fact that it responded to his punch made it hit harder. 1/2

TT

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Round 2
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TonyTone
I seen ya bitch n heard a bit, guess yal havin relations
What a Catch, i gotta say
...............u must hav some HORRIBLE hand-eye coordination
Lol, this was humurous, and fresh. I've never seen this before. 1.5/2

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Big Picture:
i was sayin your dates are fat not your skinny ass... but this is good
cuz know i can break this twig quicker than if i snuck up in the woods
Psssh. The 2nd line seemed like you were just trying to convince yourself that you could win. This was weak. 0.5/2


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