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on this site y'all prolly aint even think that i could do nufin' like this but'chall bout ta see one of if not the illiset post that'chuve ever seen. the audio version will be on youtube soon. but what i'm about to do is display every lyrical aspect of music. and do it all myself without even contradicting. just like a talent show. well for the first act, here is don cardy performing the multi's style!!

(MULTI'S)
got some nice diva's,ice blingers, in wife-beaters/
nasty but aint trife niether, who got cake, it'll be candy if i treat 'er/
dont like it? find another dude, ta love u boo, like suckers do/
hand-cuff 'em too, aint nufin' to, a thugga to, book buggaboo's/
shawty like, this cant be life, a rolla? naw she cant be wife/
aint none to gain its all in vien like sinnin' as the anti-christ/
but'chu know i'm a superstar, got stupid cake, push stupid cars/
manuver threw 'em, games in a stuper no-matter who u are/
y'all bammas too laxidazical, lyrically in a crazy mood, will blaze a fool/
with game or tools, it just aint no explainin' dude/
beast ripper, da heat spitter, make weak nuggas, retreat quicker/
street figure who raps, sings, and speaks realer/

"iite y'all saw me put that multi s*** down but a whole racka people can do that so lemme bring on my next act, the Punchlines, Metaphors, and Wordplay..."

(PMW)
like a ratchet came wit' da jacket, i'm dressed to kill/
pickle raps, the only way u'll get record deals(dills)/
how u gone JUMP at da don when u can't STAND me/
cuz the only time u rip rappers is when u openin' candy/
u gotta build a new flight, cant take our steps/
battles is like blind dates, i dont know who i'm a take out next/
u beatin' me? must be on speed, no racin' for tempo/
moe, i brings the pane like i'm replacin a window/
i'ma show u i'm the best and what the game's bout/
plus i make it rain like,... never mind, that s***s played out/
and i aint never gonna stop/
bullets, bread, or career, like a broken toaster, urs aint never gonna pop!/

"okay! we got that out the way. for the majority of rappers out these days, thatsthere whole arsonal. pmw'sand multi's but naw i got plenty more styles. lemme welcome my next act, storytelling."

(STORYTELLING)
a woman comes home,finds her bun in bed with another man/
he jumps up out the bed like, "u dont understand"/
shawty kirkin' out, went to the safe, pulled the hammer on the bamma/
blamblammed 'em, where he was standin', now his man is/
runnin thru the house, goes out the door/
elevator broke, so tryna out run her, he went up some floors/
thru the stairway, took the maintenence elevator to the rooftop,cielin/
started climbin butt naked down the side of the buildin'/
shawty was smart tho, she in her car chillin/
sniper style, red-dot inconspicuously on his head/
heard sireans,dude still climbin the buildin'/
so she left the block and dude got locked up by the feds/

'i know y'all like "slow down son u killin em" but its whatever tho. i kills all these ways, next act is that mack s***."

(MACK)
shawty i'm mesmerized and hypnotized at the same time/
if your man wanna compete than its game time/
but no games wit'chu cuz all i wanna do is stay true/
to u bo, gucci, prada, michunu, & get'chu higher than moon boots/
no drugs, i'm talkin' in love, have u imaginin' thangs/
all day bringin' u joy thru ur pain/
that'chu go thru, a piece of love to take wherever u go to/
have u so happy till u wont want no uva men ta approach u/
cuz i duz my thizzle, and i'm doin' it well/
put that stamp on u girl, so they destined to fail/
its like havin' fine wine, yet bammas is offerin' u grape juice/
hilarious, a sexy shawty, lemme take u/

"now who else u know can spit that real S*** and still spit that good game to ya rolla? lol. F outta here, heres my next act. the backpack."

(BACKPACK)
the hood got 6 escapes, jail, hell & crack sales/
or sports drugs & entertainment if u did not fail/
billion dollar industries gettin' started from drug money/
cuz we got ideas, hopes, & dreams, with no funding/
strangers come thru ta make change more than ta make changes/
gangstas learn to aim for range, while y'all aim for the ranges/
rovers, now what'chu have got, is just a crab-pot/
blacktee'd down, lookin at G's wit' cummerbuns and ascots/
lookin' like they got money & we starvin' so we rob 'em/
they look at us, wont even give us jobs &/
its just the environment created by our government/
from the Projects to the trailer park they laugh and they lovin it/

"if u ever been in poverty than u prolly know about that mentality, well lets go to the last act. just spittin' that hardcore s***.

(HARDCORE)
tre's & AK's, thangs blaze, bang bang, mayday, man down/
hide u out of the range of smell or sound/
so they wont even know that'chu screamin' & stinkin'/
infrared beam 'em, leave 'em, leakin', hit 'em at a show like lincoln/
then skate off in the lincoln, continental/
find ya connects, & where u linkin's where i gotta get to/
find the youngest in ya crew, get shawty slumped,we got 'em punked/
bass pump in the truck to drown out sounds of the body in the trunk/
drive the whip off the wilson bridge/
dive out b4 it falls, then come back ta steal ur kids/
kidnapped for ransum, u aint got it?, get'cha kids napped/
& i'm still considered a minor so only charges'll be hi-jack's/

"now i just put on a whole show provin' that i can do it all, and if theres an element that i forgot, than holla at me and i'll do that too.... talent show over."

what'chall think of that?

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and youngins say that i should dumb down my wordplay/
y'all ball, i just sign lines and let the words play/ DRAMA GANG established 2005MY MUSIC. CONSTANTLY UPDATED!!!!
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=527460

i know i dont drop that often on here so i hope that this opened y'all eyes to what i'm really capable of. and its just off my head as i typed. so i should go head write & record. but ne ways. tell me what'chu think about it.

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and youngins say that i should dumb down my wordplay/
y'all ball, i just sign lines and let the words play/ DRAMA GANG established 2005MY MUSIC. CONSTANTLY UPDATED!!!!
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=527460

how u gone JUMP at da don when u can't STAND me/
cuz the only time u rip rappers is when u openin' candy/

i thought that was good....

if u want me to give you proper feed back that shit will take me about 20 min to do so or more...

matter of fact i will.... but later on when i get outta school...

nice drop in some of them like ( PMW) ( BACKPACK)
the (HARDCORE) was decent could of been better...

the other ones i wasnt so much into them nor feeling them as much but i'll give u proper feed back later on.... peace...