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06-11-08, 10:52 PM
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Semper Fi
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Quickie verse Thats life kid
IP: ADE9 81EA
Back when it was real
No ill-will Combined with steel Now they hot headed hearts chilled In a mid-life crisis A life is more than prices Remember how priceless a life is To the father that like kids servin a life bid Who hates his jail cell and all that life did To the leaders that want fortunes like midas Know that you can't buy rights for the righteous In these groups....ever emersed, never dispersed but forever diverse, wantin myspace and not thinkin twice about the universe So im victiorious on top of the worlds end Yet I forget that the world spins And see Im at the bottom another hopeless journeys begins Prayin that da mist of da winds Is enough to wash away my sins We take shit and call it the gloriest times The sorriest mind notorious to the victorious rhyme we left behind the ideals who walk the path blind Who paved a rode in hopes to find A life thats better designed Another quickie i plan to use for a song...well its recorded just gotta do reverbing and mixing.
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06-11-08, 10:54 PM
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Semper Fi
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IP: ADE9 81EA
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3216217
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3216219
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06-12-08, 04:38 PM
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IP: 758C 908A
what up chris..
I think with a descent - good beat, this could be alright as an audio... As for text, the piece seemed kinda basic. The flow throughout this entire piece was maintained very well...
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06-12-08, 10:39 PM
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IP: 46DC DA3A
that was pretty ill
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quicky verse thats life kid  ~Welcome to The MEDIkated Lyfe..........~ |
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06-13-08, 02:27 AM
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Semper Fi
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IP: 1921 4445
Yeah...hopefully you will hear it by next week....
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06-13-08, 02:32 AM
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Whys That?
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IP: 651E B56A
As a text drop this is wack as fuck, hopefully you can peice it together dope with audio. The multis are ok, but the layout and rhyme scheme is shakier than parkinsons, nah layins?
I guess im not feeling it cause when it comes ot text Im more of a topical sorta outlook, rather than dropping your 'verse your wrote for a track' feel me? Anyway, stay dropping, would rather have you drop more serious drops, but its your choice. lol one. |
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06-15-08, 11:47 AM
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Within Eternity's Wither
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IP: 2799 F4A7
Not too fond of text drops in OM seeing as they are usually lyrics of an audio which should be posted under an audio drop.
*shrugs* *awaits the audio*
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06-15-08, 01:00 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 60E3 0794
this is very basic and not a text type of drop audio probley sound better but i dont know how much better fam because it still basic and noting had me like DANM it was like ooh ok keep droping them thou u'll get better.
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