Voted For: C.A.L.I

Perfect record?......not if you look at all of the factors
You bash herbs so your words ain't nothing but weedwackers


vs.

nothing.


pinky-links in verses are kinda gay and outdated by like 2 years haha..though you had some good concepts in your verse and i thought you would take this easily..though i felt in the long run you could have come a lot harder bro.

CALI-Your verse was a lot more consistant than your opponents. I like how you used wordplay in your last line shit basically won it for you hands down...just try and get your flow up a little...


v/cali

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Voted For: C.A.L.I

Ridiculous....


this is prolly the worst verse i've ever seen from cali and he completely ripped the other guy with minimal effort....

i mean... the barack obama line was stretched... i tried saying it in all kinds of ways and just couldn't get it to flow smoothly...

nothing but a trash ho?.... wow... that's what's not hot... and the follow up line was basic and boring

closer?...weak...nothing made me go oooooooooooh.....aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah

but then again he didn't need it for this one

Pinky...for realz...step ya game up... matter fact... don't step ...leap and skip a few steps

that cell phone line was terrible...what does packin' metal have to do with cell phones (besides the all tell reference)?... not to mention it was stretched all to hell

second line was even worse......nothing connected...the links are all eff'd up...c'mon man... if you're gonna use links...which is basically explaining your punches and lines (which is also pretty wack)...then at least do it properly... i was looking for a pic of CALI with a shiny cell phone or packing crates at a warehouse or sum shyt.... very disappointing

what can i say about your closer? absolutely nothing...i felt empty after reading this garbage...like a kid without a christmas... "where are MY gifts, man?!!!!!!"...i mean really... step it up... this shyt's "obvious"...since that seemd to be your favorite word.

Cali wins with a better formulated throw away verse

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maybe CALI actually won this one, lol

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