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Old 02-19-09, 05:12 PM   #1
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Preseason Tournament Wk2: JTR vs Jonathon

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Rules

This is a one day show so you check/drop today and what not... its like a preseason tournament. who ever wins goes to move on to the next day the other shall fall into the losers bracket. when this week is up. which is by this coming monday and the season starts the winner of the tournament and the runner up will be the top seeds and hold down the Heavy Weight Title and the Light Weight Title. Get It? Got It? GOOD....

This week you must drop a verse, I'm not giving any wins for those who just check in when their opponent noshows.

Due by tomorrow @ 5:00 PM CST
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Old 02-19-09, 07:39 PM   #2
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check, show up please
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Old 02-19-09, 09:15 PM   #3
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Read me and weep

This life's had so many challenges;
& I spent most of my time just tryin' to balance them.
I still have those hidden talents yet to be found,
& still remain with those memories
that'll finish me...
I hate to stay awake another day,
all I have to do is squeeze this nine
& it'll be night all the time.
But its confusing to me
how could something so easy
be bruising me deeply?
Puzzled & solved;
my heart left involved
in a woman who'd die for me
I hope she changed her mind
cuz I don't want her to cry & see
my body laying limp on the floor
next to the foot of our bed
& right beside the frame of our door...
It'd be hard to see her wherever I'm goin'
& just the thought of leavin's
killin' my soul n' I know that my time
hasn't quite arrived, as I pry my heart open
& bleed just to leave her out to dry.
It's just not worth it anymore
the life lived is worthless by me,
I'm not even religous but I get on my knees.
My eyes drip sorrow in thought
of what my morrow has braught.
Cover my face to hide the pain,
red in the veins & self reduced to a lame...
I'm done with this shame,
I love you forever...
No matter what babe
just remember this letter...

Local reporters arrived on the scene,
another suicide case, the 10th in two weeks.
We asked the spouse what was it about
as she weeps, she claimed the pain was too deep.
She said she was asleep, it was around 3
when the gunshots awoke her to a mountain too steep.
The family couldn't be reached for comment,
two of his brothers died in an Iraqi bombin'.
One of his friends was crying as he intends
"I tried and tried to keep him away from that dumb gun"
We keep our prayers for him & his loved ones

at least I went out with a bang...
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Old 02-19-09, 10:40 PM   #4
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wtf is this....
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Old 02-20-09, 08:29 PM   #5
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You got til' five tomorrow to post or you're dq'd.
If you do post battle will end at 10
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Old 02-21-09, 01:55 AM   #6
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this is unorganised, take the win, i dont care.. i just posted a verse last round for nothing
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Old 02-21-09, 08:35 AM   #7
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yea I agree on the unorganized part, this leaque is not working, preseasons idea is retarded and no one is posting wether or not gunna vote the one day bullshit is just pushing people away, no one is going to be around when this thing finnaly starts up. Need more reliable writers, and you guys need to think this out a little better, run it like a normal leaque, Its like we have to make the rules ar an individual and follw them ourself. Choose the topic for us, make some line limits, cause alph wrote a whole fucking song with a course and all, get some people and start the season. It's almost as if you guys have no idea what your doing. Don't get all offended just giving you the down low on the battlers view of this.
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Old 02-21-09, 01:11 PM   #8
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lol ok.. i'll get this since thats how it is.
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