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Old 02-19-09, 05:15 PM   #1
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Preseason Tournament Wk2: one way vs Mr.Write vs Alphabetized

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This is a one day show so you check/drop today and what not... its like a preseason tournament. who ever wins goes to move on to the next day the other shall fall into the losers bracket. when this week is up. which is by this coming monday and the season starts the winner of the tournament and the runner up will be the top seeds and hold down the Heavy Weight Title and the Light Weight Title. Get It? Got It? GOOD....

This week you must drop a verse, I'm not giving any wins for those who just check in when their opponent noshows.

Due by tomorrow @ 5:00 PM CST
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Old 02-19-09, 08:37 PM   #2
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check.........topics?
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Old 02-19-09, 09:41 PM   #3
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Old 02-19-09, 11:22 PM   #4
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After the shots fired


I just lay and reminice with quivering lips, amiss
Not if I would of missed but why I didn't take the risk
This shit? Is it worth it? Cuz now i'm feeling worthless
I'm told I did the right thing...
... but have no grounds to support it
My mind contorts with, notions and different choices
Which are all blurred out by my consciences many voices
But I rejoice in my sorrow, because my souls still alive
because any joy I can conjure up to my mind is a bribe
So maybe my mind just might end up letting me survive
And not dive into the truth I'm just trying to hide




With the judgement I lack, I struggle to keep my head intact
Knowing that after the shot's fired, I can never get it back




It sucks having a gun, because it comes with responsibility
And it's that same thing that can haunt, and its killing me
Wanted for three murders, I had the fucking guy
Standing right in front of me, looking me in the eye
Almost as if to say "Im READY TO DIE!"...
... but it's a lie ...
So at gunpoint I scrample for thought, but heres the plight
I have the Green light to kill, but do I read him his rights?




With the judgement I lack, I struggle to keep my head intact
Knowing that after the shot's fired, I can never get it back




But heres the truth, the moment I saw him I checked my eyes
And confirmed to myself it was someone I recognized
someone I couldn't despise, so instead I stood speechless
You might say I'm feeble, but how would you meet this?
So as I took no action, the crook got to actin
Whipped the heat out quick and I saw it flashin
My reaction? A disaster, my sorrow's got me mad
Cuz now i'm a failure as a cop, as well as a dad
And after that? I couldn't live with myself.. so I stopped
And I put the gun to my temple and I finished the job



With the judgement I lack, I struggle to keep my head intact
Knowing that after the shot's fired, I can never get it back
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Old 02-20-09, 03:21 PM   #5
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Same topic

The last of the sun is pulled into the earth as day light ceases to exist
The shadows bring comfort almost impossible to resist
I hope my secret’s safe as long as time assists
‘Cause, Time permits change, but change leads to the abyss
So I stay equipped with the same heat, clip and finger tip
that’s cost me my soul, and cost him the life he lived
Morality is sacrificed to the system that we fight
that’s why I battle in rhythm to stay outa prison tonight
But the guilt is hot on my trail and regret bites at my heels
I stay one step ahead for now, but the out come is real
I’m wanted and known, guilty with out any deals
Cause there’s no one to give up when everybody squeals
Got nothing to do, no where to go, and no one to see
Cause being on the run is lonely, and lonely I’ll be
So here’s to another night of reality, I struggle to grip
As I get ready to enter back into hiding , till the light ceases to exist
Then its back on my way, cause I’m down to the wire
It’s a long road to redemption…….after the shots fired
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Old 02-20-09, 05:25 PM   #6
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This battle stays open until 5 votes are given.
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Old 02-20-09, 08:28 PM   #7
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for mr.write

you have until tomorrow at five to post your verse or you're dq'd
battle will end tomorrow at 10 PM
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Old 02-20-09, 10:24 PM   #8
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sorry just got on ill edit my verse in
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