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Old 02-23-09, 02:30 PM   #1
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Old 02-23-09, 02:45 PM   #2
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...................checking G/l dios
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check g/l to you too homie
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Old 02-23-09, 11:05 PM   #4
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ill drop first..


dios GOTTA be on something.. I mean to think you'll level with this
please... you couldn't be class -a- if you WERE the heroin bitch!
your attempting a miss, in survival of fits, I aim for heads
and if your inclined to strategize... you'd just be playing dead
so cam was more original, round one greets this fortunate fool
as your flipping shit till nightfall... top of the morning to you!
enduring this feud, your hip hop-less, this kid will be faltered,
you haven't elevated from your wack self... just heavily altered
sympathy offers, cryptic nameplays, kid's no better than horrid
if DIOS catches an L in his ass backwords, he'll still never be SOLID
I said he aint got this.. no biggie, but your mothers an addict dammit
hops out the bushes to light that ass up, like crack commandments
your catching feelings cause I'm a slew of success in compilation
your talking legend stats? I don't even think you got a nomination
fucker, stop it.. or keep fooling around and act mad retarded
your heading directly to the jump, like a dumb trapeze artist!

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Old 02-27-09, 03:31 PM   #5
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WTF I thought verses were due Friday. Sorry Dude it was my birthday I turned 20 no way I was comin on last night or the day before and I thought verses were due Friday otherwise I woulda dropped Monday or Tuesday. Count my verse or not your choice Bob.



you know that I'm better than you, see dyke you fear me
I'll put u in a lower class so fast Karl Marx will have to re-write his theory
please bitch you're not on my level the punches make you sea sick
everyone knows to beat BO all you ever need is a speed stick
if I knew your pathetic ass in real life you better run to defenses
fuck a online battle, the whole crew run up and Jump you like fences
fuckin faggot, share a room with your little brother it isn't right dog
that you been in the closest so long he scared to sleep wit the lights off
5 minutes on this verse I don't gotta try this hurtin kids a fairy
who couldn't define illness with a urban dictionary
Bob always ROFL @ my bars, it's easy to bomb this dumb clown
while when he reads his own shit..
his attention span even has kids with ADD sayin calm the fuck down!
I'm wild and sick, countin lot's of money infront of him this child's a bitch
that was the first time he ever seen STACKS.. wait.. his verse is a PILE of shit!
my words wreck the pride of oppition in the middle of times sqaure
I'd put Bob down in the dumps but, he already resides there...


quick 16
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Old 02-27-09, 06:08 PM   #6
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dios GOTTA be on something.. I mean to think you'll level with this
please... you couldn't be class -a- if you WERE the heroin bitch!
delivered weakly, wording was off
your attempting a miss, in survival of fits, I aim for heads
and if your inclined to strategize... you'd just be playing dead
this was ok, didn't hit that hard though
so cam was more original, round one greets this fortunate fool
as your flipping shit till nightfall... top of the morning to you!
didn't see it as a hitting punch
enduring this feud, your hip hop-less, this kid will be faltered,
you haven't elevated from your wack self... just heavily altered
again not a hard hit
sympathy offers, cryptic nameplays, kid's no better than horrid
if DIOS catches an L in his ass backwords, he'll still never be SOLID
ok
I said he aint got this.. no biggie, but your mothers an addict dammit
hops out the bushes to light that ass up, like crack commandments
na
your catching feelings cause I'm a slew of success in compilation
your talking legend stats? I don't even think you got a nomination
ok, but generic
fucker, stop it.. or keep fooling around and act mad retarded
your heading directly to the jump, like a dumb trapeze artist!
yea the jump line has been used a lot this week like I expected, lol, wasn't feeling this




you know that I'm better than you, see dyke you fear me
I'll put u in a lower class so fast Karl Marx will have to re-write his theory
ok could have been put together better
please bitch you're not on my level the punches make you sea sick
everyone knows to beat BO all you ever need is a speed stick
set up is weak, punch is ok but delivery could have been better
if I knew your pathetic ass in real life you better run to defenses
fuck a online battle, the whole crew run up and Jump you like fences
na
fuckin faggot, share a room with your little brother it isn't right dog
that you been in the closest so long he scared to sleep wit the lights off
lol ok but wording could have made it stronger after all it is a generic concept
5 minutes on this verse I don't gotta try this hurtin kids a fairy
who couldn't define illness with a urban dictionary
na
Bob always ROFL @ my bars, it's easy to bomb this dumb clown
while when he reads his own shit..
his attention span even has kids with ADD sayin calm the fuck down!
na
I'm wild and sick, countin lot's of money infront of him this child's a bitch
that was the first time he ever seen STACKS.. wait.. his verse is a PILE of shit!
wasn't feeling it
my words wreck the pride of oppition in the middle of times sqaure
I'd put Bob down in the dumps but, he already resides there...
weak



Ima have to say bob he had a bit of impact with almost every line while dios only had a few hitters.
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Old 02-27-09, 06:19 PM   #7
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dios GOTTA be on something.. I mean to think you'll level with this
please... you couldn't be class -a- if you WERE the heroin bitch!
(Eh.)
your attempting a miss, in survival of fits, I aim for heads
and if your inclined to strategize... you'd just be playing dead
(ok.)
so cam was more original, round one greets this fortunate fool
as your flipping shit till nightfall... top of the morning to you!
(Eh, ok.)
enduring this feud, your hip hop-less, this kid will be faltered,
you haven't elevated from your wack self... just heavily altered
(Nah.)
sympathy offers, cryptic nameplays, kid's no better than horrid
if DIOS catches an L in his ass backwords, he'll still never be SOLID
(Cool concept, but its pretty much impossible to word. this was ok.)
I said he aint got this.. no biggie, but your mothers an addict dammit
hops out the bushes to light that ass up, like crack commandments
(Nah.)
your catching feelings cause I'm a slew of success in compilation
your talking legend stats? I don't even think you got a nomination
(Cool.)
fucker, stop it.. or keep fooling around and act mad retarded
your heading directly to the jump, like a dumb trapeze artist!
(Lol, ok.)

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you know that I'm better than you, see dyke you fear me
I'll put u in a lower class so fast Karl Marx will have to re-write his theory
(Eh.)
please bitch you're not on my level the punches make you sea sick
everyone knows to beat BO all you ever need is a speed stick
(Cool, but wording.)
if I knew your pathetic ass in real life you better run to defenses
fuck a online battle, the whole crew run up and Jump you like fences
(Eh.)
fuckin faggot, share a room with your little brother it isn't right dog
that you been in the closest so long he scared to sleep wit the lights off
(Nah.)
5 minutes on this verse I don't gotta try this hurtin kids a fairy
who couldn't define illness with a urban dictionary
(nah.)
Bob always ROFL @ my bars, it's easy to bomb this dumb clown
while when he reads his own shit..
his attention span even has kids with ADD sayin calm the fuck down!
(mehh..)
I'm wild and sick, countin lot's of money infront of him this child's a bitch
that was the first time he ever seen STACKS.. wait.. his verse is a PILE of shit!
(Nah.)
my words wreck the pride of oppition in the middle of times sqaure
I'd put Bob down in the dumps but, he already resides there...
(ok.. i had a down in the dumps punch last week.)


You both didn't try, lol and bob was probably wicked baked knowing him.

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Old 02-27-09, 07:07 PM   #8
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boberric:
dios GOTTA be on something.. I mean to think you'll level with this
please... you couldn't be class -a- if you WERE the heroin bitch!
6/10 - pretty good opener.
your attempting a miss, in survival of fits, I aim for heads
and if your inclined to strategize... you'd just be playing dead
4.5/10 - iight.
so cam was more original, round one greets this fortunate fool
as your flipping shit till nightfall... top of the morning to you!
3.5/10 - nah.
enduring this feud, your hip hop-less, this kid will be faltered,
you haven't elevated from your wack self... just heavily altered
4/10 - meh.
sympathy offers, cryptic nameplays, kid's no better than horrid
if DIOS catches an L in his ass backwords, he'll still never be SOLID
5.5/10 - sortah.
I said he aint got this.. no biggie, but your mothers an addict dammit
hops out the bushes to light that ass up, like crack commandments
4/10 - meh.
your catching feelings cause I'm a slew of success in compilation
your talking legend stats? I don't even think you got a nomination
3.5/10 - nah.
fucker, stop it.. or keep fooling around and act mad retarded
your heading directly to the jump, like a dumb trapeze artist!
6/10 - niice closer.
37/80

hip hop:
you know that I'm better than you, see dyke you fear me
I'll put u in a lower class so fast Karl Marx will have to re-write his theory
4.5/10 - decent opener.
please bitch you're not on my level the punches make you sea sick
everyone knows to beat BO all you ever need is a speed stick
5/10 - iight.
if I knew your pathetic ass in real life you better run to defenses
fuck a online battle, the whole crew run up and Jump you like fences
3/10 - nah.
fuckin faggot, share a room with your little brother it isn't right dog
that you been in the closest so long he scared to sleep wit the lights off
5/10 - haha.
5 minutes on this verse I don't gotta try this hurtin kids a fairy
who couldn't define illness with a urban dictionary
4.5/10 - made me laugh.
Bob always ROFL @ my bars, it's easy to bomb this dumb clown
while when he reads his own shit..
his attention span even has kids with ADD sayin calm the fuck down!
3.5/10 - ahhhh...
I'm wild and sick, countin lot's of money infront of him this child's a bitch
that was the first time he ever seen STACKS.. wait.. his verse is a PILE of shit!
4/10 - nah.
my words wreck the pride of oppition in the middle of times sqaure
I'd put Bob down in the dumps but, he already resides there...
4.5/10 - meh closer.
34/80


closer battle .. but i give this to bob .. he came just a bit harder.. dont think hip hop tried much since its his bday
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Old 02-27-09, 07:56 PM   #9
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dios GOTTA be on something.. I mean to think you'll level with this
please... you couldn't be class -a- if you WERE the heroin bitch!
(lol nice punch I liked hw the 1st line relates to the punch)....
your attempting a miss, in survival of fits, I aim for heads
and if your inclined to strategize... you'd just be playing dead
(wasnt feeling).....
so cam was more original, round one greets this fortunate fool
as your flipping shit till nightfall... top of the morning to you!
(didnt really get where u was going)....
enduring this feud, your hip hop-less, this kid will be faltered,
you haven't elevated from your wack self... just heavily altered
(no real punch seems too mch filler)...
sympathy offers, cryptic nameplays, kid's no better than horrid
if DIOS catches an L in his ass backwords, he'll still never be SOLID
(not bad...)
I said he aint got this.. no biggie, but your mothers an addict dammit
hops out the bushes to light that ass up, like crack commandments
(i like the multie but no diss)..
your catching feelings cause I'm a slew of success in compilation
your talking legend stats? I don't even think you got a nomination
(nice...)
fucker, stop it.. or keep fooling around and act mad retarded
your heading directly to the jump, like a dumb trapeze artist
(i get the wordplay but dont get the line?)...

DIOS

you know that I'm better than you, see dyke you fear me
I'll put u in a lower class so fast Karl Marx will have to re-write his theory
(not bad)...
please bitch you're not on my level the punches make you sea sick
everyone knows to beat BO all you ever need is a speed stick
(nice punch)....
if I knew your pathetic ass in real life you better run to defenses
fuck a online battle, the whole crew run up and Jump you like fences
(nah)....
fuckin faggot, share a room with your little brother it isn't right dog
that you been in the closest so long he scared to sleep wit the lights off
(doesnt apply but gd punch)
5 minutes on this verse I don't gotta try this hurtin kids a fairy
who couldn't define illness with a urban dictionary
(gd concept needs better wording)..
Bob always ROFL @ my bars, it's easy to bomb this dumb clown
while when he reads his own shit..
his attention span even has kids with ADD sayin calm the fuck down!
(wasn't feeling)...
I'm wild and sick, countin lot's of money infront of him this child's a bitchot
that was the first time he ever seen STACKS.. wait.. his verse is a PILE of shit!
(lol not bad)...
my words wreck the pride of oppition in the middle of times sqaure
I'd put Bob down in the dumps but, he already resides there
(weak closer)...
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Old 02-27-09, 07:59 PM   #10
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pretty weak battle im sure you guys can come harder but props I think bob edged it with me with that heroin line which was pretty dope.peace

btw this may sound silly but ho do you highlight in bold on your replies?lol
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Bob wins 1-0

dios loses and goes to the jump
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