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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1550#post301550

This was originaly ment for L.L.B.L. against Jay. but tha site crashed, so we still gone finish this biz. You have had forevah to think some spit up Jay so I'm sure you'll come hard dawgie, but that's why we gonna have two battles goin. I'll see you at the other battle playah. peace!

1st to 5 wins
3-0 k.o.
no haters, dick rydahs, crews, freeposters, bullshit nonsense.
15-20 bars
voter please explain votes, please!


Wally diggin a grave for JayPana while he wavin a gay bannah flag that say “save faggs forevah” bitch you ant clever::
He comes soft wit ‘semen’ on his ‘spine’, damn son you weak wit them ‘cum-backs’ and dream to be sick wit diseased lines::
placin text next to me so kats will believe that you a real ILL netcee emcee, bitch please! I'ma kill this man wit ease::
Demandin beef?! I've already R.I.P.’ped you, but ya think you can still handle Greens I’ll dismantle ya peeps wit u::
naw, tell ya crew to relax or else I’ll hand you their teeth wit the roots still attached!, I’mma prove that you a wack kat::
Your trash Is garbage face the facts, JayPana another basic ass, When I spit you get drowned when my fluid attacks!::
I`ll leave you more holy than Jesus at mass sporting A Jason mask, Jay can’t last when I blast punchlines wit class::
Jay beating me is like dead people deciding to speak, I’ll flame broil this geeks skill That Jumped up on my grill real weak::
I`m enormous with flows, street battle?? Shiiit.. I’ll Stab him Wit a fork in the road until this poor little dork is exposed::
devastated innovative punchlines storm the skies voters celebrate your defeat like LORDS!, you were born to DIE!!::
L.L.B.L. what’s the mothahfuckin fuss about? Well you know I spit combustion bouts! bitch you got questions doubts?::
you’ll catch a busted mouth, wit ya brains gushin out on ya ceramic tile flush wit grout, panic when I crush ya stayle::
I got a Pana Jay fried like scrambled eggs, Man he knew tha talk but when it came to tha walk he forgot to handle his legs::
you’re not Sick cause ya dick’s like them wicks on them candle sticks! Tick-tok-tik….. time stops he awed by my presence::
long pauses fall at any second…check it…beating me is like seeing chinese albinos on rhinos pulling a sled dragging 9-Hoes!::
through time tha design of my Fine mind Grows, and line after line explodes ta leave ya rhymes behind like faggot assholes::
FUCK a drive-by!, I'm bringin this battle to ya house! Cause you know you gettin beat beyond ya SHADOW OF DOUBTS!::

*edit for rules and link*

one time for Jay

checkin in...i had my verse tha day tha site crashed...i jus gotta find it lol.

aight here u go lol...

dead silence in tha crowd...everybody'z too shocked to speak/
iz it cuz wally'z too ILL fo applause?...nah hiz shit'z too weak//

i'll rip this fag so bad even his whole crew will back this/
he named himself after a pharmacy so how come nuthin can cure hiz wackness?/
he'z dedicated to hiz medication but to his knowledge he'z poppin pillz for menstruation/
whoeva tha hell said he wuz ILL made a false accusation/
he'z a perfect demonstration of sumbody pushin 'down' instead of 'up' fo elevation/
ur crew'z a bunch of dick ryderz...O.N.E. ran a train on OnE/
named ya crew after him than decided to battle ur "mentor"...u really think u could've won?/
metasin ripped all of u and now ur comin at our crew/*
if he did that to u wut'z gonna be tha outcome when A.I. vs. O.N.E. iz thru?/
wally'z all bout "cheddar", likely to bust a cap on himself/
this fag has a better chance of jugglin ghetto sam'z 'pair-a-dyce' then puttin a win on tha shelf/
ya flow'z like fresh bread, it'z 'soft' when it comez out/
tha only time he can really flow iz when he'z bout to cry...this battle'z ova so go ahead and pout/

^lmao...this shit iz old as fuck but o well...i'll post my linkz in a minute start votin.

i NEVER got beat by metasin. and lost to One as a newbie, I learned a valued lesson from that battle...haha...good personals dawg, you seem to know alot. lol! peace & good battle dawgie!!

!!VOTERS BEGIN!!

Good battle

Flow-Jay Pana,
i'll rip this fag so bad even his whole crew will back this/
he named himself after a pharmacy so how come nuthin can cure hiz wackness?/
he'z dedicated to hiz medication but to his knowledge he'z poppin pillz for menstruation/
whoeva tha hell said he wuz ILL made a false accusation/
he'z a perfect demonstration of sumbody pushin 'down' instead of 'up' fo elevation/
Punches tha same ^
Metaz an sims an shit were too Greens...
Ill punches too...
Wally diggin a grave for JayPana while he wavin a gay bannah flag that say “save faggs forevah” bitch you ant clever::
He comes soft wit ‘semen’ on his ‘spine’, damn son you weak wit them ‘cum-backs’ and dream to be sick wit diseased lines::
placin text next to me so kats will believe that you a real ILL netcee emcee, bitch please! I'ma kill this man wit ease::
Demandin beef?! I've already R.I.P.’ped you, but ya think you can still handle Greens I’ll dismantle ya peeps wit u::
naw, tell ya crew to relax or else I’ll hand you their teeth wit the roots still attached!, I’mma prove that you a wack kat::
Your trash Is garbage face the facts, JayPana another basic ass, When I spit you get drowned when my fluid attacks!::

Lost me here tho, better storytellin too...
you’ll catch a busted mouth, wit ya brains gushin out on ya ceramic tile flush wit grout, panic when I crush ya stayle::
I got a Pana Jay fried like scrambled eggs, Man he knew tha talk but when it came to tha walk he forgot to handle his legs::
you’re not Sick cause ya dick’s like them wicks on them candle sticks! Tick-tok-tik….. time stops he awed by my presence::

I didnt really get much of that,
Vote Pana

0-1 him, thanx for voting...

uppin for more.

uppin'

pana had some nice personals in his verse, and some decent rips and punches.... but I liked the flow and style of wally'z spit... it was a tough decision.. vote=wally

yeah
pana was hittin
he had some nice flows
the menstruation and pharmacy lines were good

but wally had a line that speaks for itself
"beatin me is like seein chinese albino's on rhyno's pullin a sled draggin nine hoe's"
now that's some shit you won't see

vote: wally

Yo, i'm new round here, so sorry if i'm steppin on anyones toes.

I have to say, i thought JayPana had the better flow, but i lost bits of it halfway through. Same with wally, bits of it i wern't feelin. Is there some history that i'm missing?

Anyway, i'm voting for wally due to the fact i prefered his punches and overall i thougth it was better. Still JayPanna also deserves credit as it was a good piece.

so,

Vote = Wally

pz.

vote = jay pana

this was the best battle ive seen since ive been here....finally i seen some cats that might prove to be competition.


Wally Greens - had a good verse, your long ass bars make your flow chop a little, it might be beneficial if you make them the length of jays.....but thats up to you. you had some decent punches and wordplay. your punches were nothing outstanding but they were decent. you had a couple of lines i really liked




that was aight

jay - this was a good verse. you had a good flow...some good multis and some nice punches....



^^^ sick


good battle but vote = jay

uppin..

Good lookin' out voters...

keep voting peeps.

peace

yo ma vote goes out 2 Pana. Hiz punches were more sensable, hiz flo waz tight, n hiz personalz where good.

Pana:
i'll rip this fag so bad even his whole crew will back this/
he named himself after a pharmacy so how come nuthin can cure hiz wackness?/
he'z dedicated to hiz medication but to his
^^damn, dat line waz tight

he'z dedicated to hiz medication but to his knowledge he'z poppin pillz for menstruation/
whoeva tha hell said he wuz ILL made a false accusation/
^^tight

Wally:
Wally diggin a grave for JayPana while he wavin a gay bannah flag that say “save faggs forevah” bitch you ant clever::
^^good line

He comes soft wit ‘semen’ on his ‘spine’, damn son you weak wit them ‘cum-backs’ and dream to be sick wit diseased lines::
^^haha, tight son

ova~all, i think Pana took diz shit

vote = Pana