Rules:

5 votes to win, 3 is KO
No crew, hatin, or dick rydin votes
Please explain votes

check in an I'll post soon afterwards.....

g'luck

good to go, you goin first or am i?

I'll go, give me like 20 minutes

oh yeah no more than 16 lines, forgot to say that.

aight, if it takes me awhile to write back, it's probly cause my comp froze, it does that alot

OK

*snaps fingas*

I'm lyrically established, call me the Main Street of RB,
Krem's one of them back roads, you can't reach him without goin through me/
you just a Model T, niggas crank yo stick to get you started,
all I gotta say is "boo" to have your pastor call you "dearly departed"/
you gots some nerve, how the fuck you gone diss me in the cypher,
if I wasn't here givin yo dumb ass tips, you'd still be an elementary writer/
you can't even diss straight, you spit in crooked letters,
call your ass Elephant Man, cuz you deformed in crooked sweaters/
my shit is better, your shit is better when never spoken,
everyone's had a chance to hold you, change your name to arcade token/
I coulda wrote all this shit backwords, and my shit would still work fool,
you could write ya name backwords, and yo ass will still get 'merK'ed too!!/
you in-potent in the rap field, what's your real name, Bob Dole?,
your words squiggle like the sperm you ejaculate when fuckin moles/

blah, there you go

aight

i must admit, that was some good shit, but i'm gonna do my best to out rap that spit,
yeah, i diss ya in the cypher, like eminem said, somebody's payin the pied piper,
what's this shit about you givin me tips,
the only tips you be givin, is how to lick dick,
man your scared now, your scared to death, i got your nasty ass fightin for breath,
when you see me, you cringe in terror, say my name 3 times, i'll appear in the mirror,
i'll be slicin you so much, you be beggin on your knees, "MR. KREM please stop, i don't wanna look like swiss cheese (cryin voice)
you dunno what the fuck to do when krem spits at you, you wanna run and hide under your covers like your two
"AHHHH KREM"S UNDER MY BED", mommy and daddy hear you scream,
they come runnin in "pair-of-dyce it's just a bad dream"


sorry took so long, comp fucked up

vote em up

vote: pair-a-dyce

punches hit way harder and the content was just a lot better in my eyes.

krem you used your own name too much, im pretty sure we can tell its you without it! and your verse was not hard hitting enough to compare with pair's

vote pair......for obvious reasons.....n krem u fed too much man....but since no feedin wusnt in tha rules its aite....but stil if u goin feed at least make tha punches hit.....

Krem Ill barz///
you dunno what the fuck to do when krem spits at you, you wanna run and hide under your covers like your two

Pair came way harder...I'm lyrically established, call me the Main Street of RB,
Krem's one of them back roads, you can't reach him without goin through me/
you just a Model T, niggas crank yo stick to get you started,
my shit is better, your shit is better when never spoken,
everyone's had a chance to hold you, change your name to arcade token