these sum words 4 a colab im gona do
aparently sum cat on freestyling . com bit me or something cos i posted this up b4 on battle senes.....

ya get everything took, rich or poor, chevy or truck/
I rhyme from medival books, so ill forever be tuff/
pacin mecheties and stuff to fukin bury these thugs
I burn a 5wrth like redy steady cook/
im heavy stuff to much to download on the down low
my down hs get downl low whilst sucer emcees brownose
im like a belt round yo.. sound girl
clown those whose bound to be jelous cos my crown glow/
I dont give a fuck is that clear enough
when ya here my stuff ya earsl puff till ya fearin us/
im near enough to a god bitches like did u c that/
yo I dun give a fuk so get ya cheapass on ya knee caps biatch/
rea-ct, by twistin joints, not weed cartlidge/
it s the sharperst.. fatman and arbrez
our targets sprayin the retarded like armpets/


heyo, stay away from me, I slay a emcee/
lifes blatently a game to me so now im a player/
and I don’t care f its some cats bitch/
cos when fats dic wants its ass licked she getting chap lips/
lets flip the script, suc a bitch nife a surgen/
cos when it comes to givin fucks, im like a virgen/
my style stanb out like u viewin me wreced/
only diference when I rhyme u ain soon to forget/
djs, il ruin ur set crowd’ll be suin for checks/
of compensation cos the vibrations’ll ruin there necs/
so if u like us, and cris tuc and [/i]dont give a fuck[/] /
then drop the windows cuz, turn the system up whalst u twist it up/
listen up im hot as curry, plus I always got rice-in/(rycin)
and overall im over all emcees and still rising/
its over all so in ur bloody overalls when u hi sing/


CONSTRUCTIVE critisism please

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p.s.
i wasnt sure if that hapens to evryone or me the viewin mer wreced line, when u stoned is the thing u focusing on realy clear and everything else blured?