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Old 03-04-03, 04:39 AM   #1
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Post Life - Gimme some feedback on the rhymes!!

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Life

Sometimes I feel lost in this new age earth, I felt it ever since my long awaited birth, they crowned me as the one to change this place, had dreams of me bustin rhymes just like Mase, our parents be the ones that dream for us all, sometimes we gotta go searchin for the call, shit dont come to you in everyway, gotta go lookin for goods everyday, we gotta work hard, play hard, never stop tryin, stay true and don't start lyin.

So many people in this world obsessed with wealth, too busy to worry about their own good health, material things are not the essence, you been blessed to feel my god like presence, I've found the good lord in this game of rap, I put my little south town on this worldwide map, too many cats in this life are lost in their mind, they really gotta stop bein the killin kind, we all gotta find a purpose and reach for the surface and create our fame at the head of the game, this is what I plan to do, Madskillz be bustin beats with Ju Ju, that is my dream to become the cream, of this world of rap, I've made my plan.. too many brothers gettin lost nowadays, robbin banks, stealin tanks, killin man, dogg that aint my plan, I've told u my aspirations, to take over all the nations as the greatest emcee, that is the place to be, I've got principiles in life, I aint gettin into strife, we gotta teach these kids, how to deal with troubles, we be seein doubles, gangsters everywhere, gotta find a purpose in this age, stop startin rage, get a job, gain some knowledge, grow up, stand up, be strong, don't be wrong, show some pride and dedication, do this shit for your god damn nation.

Make a difference to man, rewrite the plan of the way things are done, we all gotta have some fun, enjoy life to the max, stick to the tracks, follow your goal, lets all get high and fly for the sky, aint gettin no money, that shit aint funny, its hard out here for a startin emcee, my momma say boy you gotta get a degree, this world be tough but I aint had enough, skillz be battlin for all of time, I aint gonna lose it, I'm gonna strive for shit and create my career with just one single idea, stay true to the game, don't lose it again, we gotta find our feet where we will finally meet, all of the rewards, lets put down our swords, start usin your brain, stop goin insane, lets realise the reason and stop the treason coz we gettin in strife, that aint no kinda life.

Lets not waste our lives, I'm here to break my jives, I've found God with Rap, I aint gonna put up with this crap that the brothers spit to me, these cats gotta learn their place to be, stay in school, don't be a fool, might sound gay but you'll realise one day, its best to listen and take advice, nobody really knows what we here for, But everyday I'll scream out for more, i love this life, might even get me a wife, I wanna find love, like inspires katie, his lost turtle dove, hold on to everyday, its the only way, by the way of Jesus, heres my lyrical thesis, I'm layin it down to you, I've got the greatest crew, I love my boys, I love my ma, I love my dad, I love life, so take some time and enjoy this rhyme, learn to enjoy and take care of your boy, too many doggs bein haters, they should leave it to the creators, I'm gonna make a difference and I'm out to prove, skillz be the man with the greatest groove!!!!!! SKILLZ!!!!

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Old 03-04-03, 05:42 AM   #2
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yeahh! throwin down for the marshmallows... thanks for the props... keep rhymin for 2223
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Old 03-05-03, 02:41 AM   #3
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come on now peoples! dont just look at it... voice your opinion... thats what this whole section is all about...
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Old 03-05-03, 07:38 AM   #4
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