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03-04-03, 12:06 PM | #1 | ||||||
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The Book Of Kismet
IP: 34BF DD77
Chapter 1 - "The Gift"
Tha Formula Of Complex Equations Equipt Against Occasions Of Uncontrollable Danger, Manifested Tha Hay In Tha Manger An Abstract Mind, Chasing Tha Vapours Of Deceased Rangers We Came To Rebuild Tha Seals And Weild Them Forever Locked Raise Your Eyes To Tha Sky, Awaiting Tha Heavens To Drop Reverants Stock Knowledge And Homage Tha Beaconed Nirvana With My Back To You, Im Shunning Tha Sequence Of Martyrs I Posses This Gift, Which I Always Thought Was A Migrane As My Internal Wisdom Heightens, It Tightens My Mind Frame To Tha Point Where Im Lighting This Line Encased In Wax Suited In Black, When Staring At Me, You Face Tha Facts Embrace This Crax, Thought Patterns Inline Like Freight Trains Reconstruct Tha Walls Of A Kingodm After This Fate Rains And Tha Hate Stains Tha Garments Of Different Religions Fibre Optics Take In Incredible Pain, I Enprison This Vision Behind A 40 Bar Verse, So I Can Rehearse And Release It Into This Business, Intentionally Crippling As Knees Twist Like 3 Fists Connecting Collectively, Intellect Attacking Shackling This Discrimination That This Internet Is Backing But Lacking Tha Right Psyche To Absorb Tha Enlightenment Contorting Violence, Books Closed And More Tyson's Fighting Ceased Shinely Brightly Epochs Ago Before Bee Bop And Co Before Angry Fans Rocked Tha Show And When Sea Crops Grow I Bet That Jesus Christ Must Be Break Dancing In His Grave And Judas Repenting After He Passed Up On Tha Chancing He Gave Glancing These Days Is Over-Rated, Wasted On Melancholy Lifes Flavours Off, And Im Getting To Tasting Very Slowly Merry's Not Holy, More Like Phony, Fabricated And Wrong Ranting On And On About Evil That Contaminated This Psalm This Psalm That Was Laminated And Reborn To Live Forever Lifes Plan Is Like This Microphone That We Ripped Together Me And Never Ever, Tha Immoral Conscious Aka Letter Sender A Message Bender Trained In Havok To Cease Your Futile Mending Hides Remedies, Venturing Into Your Emotions And Intruding Fusing Agony And Vanity, Managing Your Movements Confusing Including Intricate Habits Thats He Buries In Your Being Carrie Tha Breathing Fiend And Other Type Ogres Im Seeing But Me Achieving Tha Feet Of Freedom To Greet My People Retreats Tha Seed's Of Evil That Feed Off Tha Greed Of Equals Chapter 2 - Tha Stainglass View" Picture This, Limitless Insight Fueling Tha Visionless I Can Make Out Tha Border, But Not Tha Within Imaging Giving Infinity Serenity This Century, Tha Year Of Tha Night Im Building Tha Plight, In Sight This Mole Revering Tha Light Fearing Of Life, A Silent Death Is One I Cant Even See Mr Regency Believing He Can Be Tha Habitual Being Of Glee Leaving Tha Street To Climb Tha Hierarchy Without A Dog Guiding Whats Timing?, Tha Moment I See Hands Rotate Im Lost, Finding This Winding Road Carrying On My Shoulders This Mighty Load Containing Tha Burdens Of Hope Which I Rope To My Clothes As I Travel And Unravel Tha Mysteries Of Memory Guidance Venturing Higher Or More Like Deeper Into Tha Lair Of Tyrants Flairing Up Violence, But I Bypass With Carefully Placed Steps Grace Met This Eclectic Who Accepted Tha Pace Treked A Lakes Depth Is Deep But Weep As I Describe This Story Cry For Me If Here I Exceed My Limits Fighting For Glory My Sight Is Minatory, A Feature Expressed In Childish Tales A Mindless Fable Created To Keep My Mind Fine And Stable They Lied And Were Unfaithful, Not Even My Shadow Turns To Me I Need Surgery, Both My Irises Are Hibernating Eternally Fire Shaping Eternity An Emergency Inside My Family Home Its Burning Thee And Tha End Result I Couldn't Even Be Shown Now Im Teaming With Those 4 Senses Still Alive And Kicking Whats Life For A Christian With No Eyes?, Wisdom Is Shifting And Gifting Others By Tha Giving Of Vision, Snagged On Friction A Person On Life Conviction Wishing For Bags Of Diction But Instead Wearing Rags And Trapped In This Infinite Blackout Its Not So Simple Anymore So I Have To Take Tha Back Route Around Lifes Turnpikes, Across Stern Dykes, I Earned Right But It Burns Light, I Needed To Learn Without Shining Bright My Candle Was Snubbed Out Before It Was Even Properly Lit Before Tha Match Ignited And All I Had Was A Property Wish I Bet Its Hot To Be Rich, Because Its Dark To Be Blind Im Last This Time, Can't Even Jock Tha Emcees Rocking Shine Cant Imagine Tha Vivid Colors Slapped On To An Abstract Canvas Man! It Hurts, Vision Is Weak And Now It Lacks In Manhood Man Handled By An Arsonist Vandal, Grip Slipped From Tha Handle Trying To Scramble To Tha End Zone, Tripped Into Tha Shambles Tha Reflection Of A One Way Projection, Trying To Feel Me Dropped Into Tha Hole Of My Description And Found Its Real Deep These Raised Dots Guide Me To Find The Real Fiction Of N-Demik I Have A Handicap But I Read Better Than How These Men Tell It Tha Only Merit I Obtained, Sewed It Onto My Very Own Reins Shared With Tha Grains Of My Land, And Planned For A Change |
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03-04-03, 02:28 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 5153 3B92
damm, yo what could I say about this... it's... it's Biblical!... lol...
Yo I was feeling this dawg... thought it was pretty complex and a bit hard to grasp... I didn't get all of it.... maybe cause I'm a simple mothafucker though... lol, Yo the vocab was crazy, and your flow was pretty smooth... To tell you the truth I only read chap. 1, I'll get back to you when I read the second part, right now I got to be out... Peace |
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03-04-03, 02:31 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 28D5 2F72
ever head of a guy named epidemic
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03-04-03, 03:32 PM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 9B91 D0C6
LmaO Yeah..Do You Even Kno What Endemic Means, Something Completely Different...
Just Cause You Bite, Doesn't Mean I Do Thanks For Tha Reply Alias-C |
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03-04-03, 07:01 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 9588 E886
*replies*
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03-04-03, 08:13 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 5153 3B92
This shit was hot son...great vocab, and your rhyme scheme was flawless...the meaning was something new, and it kept me wanting more the whole way through...
I suggest you do a chapter 3 and 4...lol... 11/10 Hot drop...stay spittin like this dogg... P.e.a.c.e. |
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03-05-03, 12:03 AM | #7 | ||||||||
one wink
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IP: B0B4 8853
N-D, you know I think its ill,
Quote:
As for you, fuck your a biter, 'nuff said. |
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03-05-03, 01:48 AM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 61AB A3EA
that was deeper than the ocean... dont just do chapter 3 and 4... write a whole book man... keep rhymin... i'll be looking for your other posts
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03-05-03, 09:53 AM | #9 | |||||||
.Tha Open Mic King.
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IP: 06C2 2443
jj68^
Sup poopy... hot piece, as usual... ***LOOOK WHOS BACK*** Wah Blo' ANyways...as ive sed to ya before this is a hot piece man, easily HoF worthy in my opinion... keep droppin genms, we gotta get that collab done soon... imagine that...for tha people... N-Demik & Messiah Kaeto combining to create, well, odd mumblings... holla at me bruv peace n god bless. |
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03-08-03, 06:36 PM | #10 | |||||||
.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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N-Demik dogg, this shit is hot, So many people up in here are writin these very clever, complex songs with no rhymin, but man you've managed to put it all into this one, crazy vocabulary, good wordplay, and still got it rhymin in there, in one word, this shit is DOPE!
Keep it up dogg, peace out!
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