Yo, this is some shit from a collab I'm doin' with this mc from iowa Weazil... we just started so some feedback would be appreciated.. It's a medium tempo beat, piano riff for base of rhyme..

listen, mutha fuckers better realize, their place on this globe.//
all a mill-en-ium below, current rap standards.//
I'm up here, all on my own, low and behold.//
another MC enters into the dom-ain, no-way.//
he say's his name's weaz, was back with the rest and stole the show away.//
opened a doorway, ended up in this place, with more fame.//
than he could ever imagine, I'm havin', a hard time believing it myself.//
all the power,. all the mutha-fuckers that got slay'n try'n ta challenge.//
all this tallent, but I still can't, picture,. a life without.//
these cards I've been delt with, so hot it's like I just mel-ted.//
through the grate of being wack to achieving a name.//
and being great, I guess it's fate, what else'll explain.//
how else could this have happened to little-ol' me.//

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