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Old 03-13-03, 12:59 PM   #1
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Sedulous Hours

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Repressed Inside This Coerce Village Under An Iron Boot
Flying Fluke Up A Plastic Flag Pole Of This Crying Muse
Forcing This Wheel Barrow, Wit Swag To Tha Eye-Brow
Over Tha Antisocial Summit Constructed By An Abject Of Tha Town
Tha Rapt Of Tha Found Would Rather Be Left To Itself
So It Can Enumerate Tha Corruption From Tha Induction Of Wealth
Through Tha Destruction Of Help, I Cower Clutching Tha Hope
Hostility Caught In Tha Throat Is Reserved For Tha Rope
Never Could You Hang An Aeratred Man, Accuracy Erroneous
Waft Away Frozen Mist With Open Fists Of Tha Dires Holiest
Its Like I Hear Footsteps Of Tha Wheelchair Ridden
5 Month Excursion To Tha South Pole Just To Return What I Was Given
An Empty Matchbox And Tha Wings Of A Fallen Angel
No Use To A Chain Smoker Who Looks Towards Tha Infernal Fanals
I Color Tha Walls Of Protection Wit Half Bitten Crayons
And A Single Stick Of Charcoal From A Burnt Down Craddle
I Etch A Bigotry Feasible Plan On Tha Palm Of My Hand
But Perspiration Smudged Tha Layout, Im Left Wit One Strand
One Approach Submerged By Tha Black Clouds Of Tha Untracable
Soul Of Tha Deepest Pit Means My Skin Has To Be Tha Fascicle
Im Stuck Painting Tha Sky In Colors Ive Never Even Witnessed
Refresh Tha Page To See Tha New Sewer That Im Fishing In
Catch Of Tha Day, Tha Credit Im Finding Perplexing To Pay
Law Has Nothing Better To Do But Snare Me In A Small Space
Cancel Out Tha Fundamentals Of Justice Wit A Blank Memory
I Discharge Tha Orbs Of Exuberance That Were Sent To Me
Tha Monotonous Streets I Try To Advance, Persistant Holding
Tha Panorama Of Life Into Reverse, While Im Here Evolving
Rusty Nails Hammered Into Tha Plank Where I Am Still Dwelling
Non Fiction Is Tha Liberty That Im Here, Sat, Story Telling
Left Eye Views Tha Proclaimation As Its Reflected From Others
Tha Right Envisions Tha Anguish In Tha Right's Of Tha Mothers
Noble Maturity Is Tha Lucrative That Conceals All Lewdness
Here Detectives That Are On Tha Scene Come Up Totally Clueless
Lifes An Objection To Tha Relentless, All Belief Is False
Procreational Demise, I Cant Help But Feel Some Remorse
My Flight Plane Is Off Course, Tha Path Is Non Authentic
I Was Driven Towards Tha Hedge Of Surplus By An Eclectic
Failing Tha Drug Test On Tha Track To Rambling Exhaultion
Jumping Over Tha Pond, Stepping On Tha Stones Of Caution
Instead Of Fallen In, Getting Wet, And Deliberating Over Hours
I'd Rather Stand Out In A Storm And Get Drenched By Tha Shower

Glower Upon Existence..

..As A Youth Taught Within Tha Fine Line Of Obedience
Why Try When Tha Ingreediants Of Life Are Tha Seeds Of Hurt
Proceeding Immediate Beyond Tha Prime Of A Jubilant Status
Fusing Part Heart Breaker And A Forsaken Scarlet Chaser
Into One Physical Form, Sworn On Redemption Till Dawn
But Tha Dawning Of Tha Morning Is Really What Torn Him
Emotions And Feelings I Was Storing Are Now Brought Forward
Caught Fraudulent, But Only As A Front To This Torment
A Blunt Drawing Of Soiled Events Dripped From A Poison Pen
Of Tha Moments When Death Was Rated Above A Perfect Ten
This Was Tha Star Prize Captured On My Mantle Piece
One Of My Random Streaks That I Experience More Like Feats
Four To Greet, This Turmoil Has Me As Multi Personalities
Attempting To Raise Tha Bar As I Hold On Tight To My Sanity
Family Portrait With Missing Pieces, Upon Achieving Completion
I Have To Settle For A Table Cloth Family Without Any Reason
This Boxset Was Sold Illegally To Me With No License Shown
How Can I Find Tha Rest Of Tha Heads When I Cant Even Find My Own?
I Throw A Search For Tha Lost Appearences In Hope Of Opium
In Hope Of Cloaking My Repulsion In Something Thats Less Devoting
But At Best Its Revolting Tha Way My Perception Is Evolving
And My Family Effection Is Dissolving Into This Sorrow Im Gulping
Sorry Im Eroding, From Tha Word Go I Wasn't Suited For This
So I Used Tha G From It To Do Some Glaring Into Tha O Of Tha Odd Abyss
I Only Exist Through Forgotten Twists In Tha Midst Of Genes
Even Through Tha Female Pleasure I Couldn't Stick To Dreams
I Cant Stitch Tha Seams Of Cloud Nine, Trying To Find Time
So I Can Rewind Tha Process And Progress Beyond Tha Lime Light
But Below That Level Everyone's Looking Up With Green Irises
Except Me, Raise My Eyes To Heaven Looking For Tha Timing I Missed
So I Can Silently List Tha Gifts I Need To Share With People
My Motivation In This Script Is Me Preparing To Be Equal
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Old 03-13-03, 08:29 PM   #2
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"Its Like I Hear Footsteps Of Tha Wheelchair Ridden"

"I Color Tha Walls Of Protection Wit Half Bitten Crayons"

"Jumping Over Tha Pond, Stepping On Tha Stones Of Caution"

Those where some the best lines of the first verse, Haven't read the second yet, but I will...

Good piece.
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Old 03-15-03, 06:55 AM   #3
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You're one complex cat N-Demik, one of the, if not the most clever rhymers out here, I still havn't read the whole thing, its a long piece, but what i have read is crazy dogg, keep the shit comin!!

Peace Out!!!!
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Old 03-16-03, 09:48 AM   #4
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Thanks For Tha Appreciation You Two

Now Focking Finish Reading It..LoL
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Old 03-16-03, 09:54 AM   #5
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Quote:
Its Like I Hear Footsteps Of Tha Wheelchair Ridden


Damn, Very Nice I Felt That Line A lot.

Quote:
Jumping Over Tha Pond, Stepping On Tha Stones Of Caution


Also Very Nice .


Like Always Very Nice Peice From N - Demik .. Took Me A While But I Got Through It
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Old 03-17-03, 05:27 PM   #6
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Thank ooo Jae

Up You Focks
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Old 03-19-03, 08:07 AM   #7
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man, this was poo, poo poo poo poo poo poo pooo

actually, it was iLL bro...LoL...

i needa poo thoug, prolly be a hangover stylleee too...

LoL..this was on page 5 i fink, so i saved it for some more replies innnnnniiittt

where u at anyways today?..im bored..!!

got an open mic "party" round for muh boys cuzzin's burfday...weed n beer n open mic, let messiah get drunk n make a tit of himself fallin over. lol

wanna go?

jj68^...anyways...hole ahhh at me
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Old 03-20-03, 03:56 PM   #8
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LoL^

hehejj**6868^*68^*6868^*^*^

It Was Pretty Poo

**Goes To Find His Noose**
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Old 03-20-03, 07:41 PM   #9
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This was a nice ass drop...don't know why i havn't noticed it...

Great shit...as usual...

let's get more emcees like us...and we'll have a ill as open mic...

Stay Spittin..

P.e.a.c.e.
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Old 03-21-03, 01:21 PM   #10
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Haha Word Apostle

Thanks For Your Feedback Bro0o0
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Old 03-21-03, 01:57 PM   #11
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i was feeling this. words just poured into a picture. and like Burklor listed your metaphors were some of the most
original ive ever seen. if ya got time return the favor. stay up and stay evolvin

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