Whats this world coming to after peace?
Even if this bombing stops, these kids will still be getting
Touched by Catholic preists//
Structures deplete, while they discreetly
Delete your obsolete existance cause
Were just numbers thats incomplete//
And be cautious of who you bond with
Dont learn the hard way like Shaundra Levy's
Relations with Gary Condit//
Pass the litigation stations and convents
Your future's past-tense while suits condense
The population expense//
It gets intense, as I spill out and pour
Dont question governed societys denying
Anthrax as a man made spore//
Thats nonsense, its evident that
Capitol Hill proposed the offense, hence robbing
America of your confidence//
So dont mention a veteran inventing war wepons
With intentions of apprehending descendants
Four dimensions//
Your 401 pensions, are on suspension
Until our economy rises like Gas costs
And cigarette price conventions//
Enter your plead guilty or not
Weither bringing knives on planes or
Bribing a dirty cop//
Exceeding speeds and at red signs never stop
Uncle Sam wants you and me to go sign up
For the governments plot//



This is a verse from the first song on my DEMO.
Thought I would see what some of you think.

yo,
this is alright, it'd prolly sound better in audio to huh...
It's political and i don't know a lot about your topics but still, nice flow...

you sound intelligent dog, keep rhyming...

Peace.

thanks dog. im new to the whole audio/online thing. the track should be on here in a few days