aight wut up kid...my thread ma rules, go like this 10 bar max
(2 lines = 1 bar) aight check in n we can get this goin after u check in u got 1 hour to drop then i drop after u....holla bak 1

Aight i'm dropping now

aight cool lets get this crackin..holla bak 1

I MIGHT BE A LIGHTWEIGHT/BUT I'M DROPPING LYRICAL MISSLES/
WHICH ARE GONNA BLOW X UP/QUICKER THEN KUWAIT


Snap crackle n drop/da sound of ya life/as it begins to stop
lillem just hit da pavement/lyrical non-sense/full of amazment
now i'm about to test ya scene/have pleasure doing it/ripping ya guts at da seams
STOP HOLD ON WAIT A MIN/didn't i mention/mention i'm CRAZY
gonna clone your ass/dis time into a dancing daisy
LETS RETRACE THAT/turn dat shit around/give you a sex change/
dam youll be da hotest thing in town
handcuff you to a post/you can be da sex teacher/show n tell today kids/
X finally hit da newz stands/HE WAS CAUGHT FKIN/
A 5TH GRADE SCHOOL BAND
OH SHIT my bad/heres a secret everybody
remember dat day/X doctors and nurses you played
you pulled down your pants/it had a sign it read/PLEASE ENTER DIS WAYYY
i wanted to be ur friend/but your grabbing dick
and giving head/like its the new rising trend
FUCKEN fag/lyrical understatement/id rather hang myself
THEN LISTEN TO YOUR STATEMENT
im neurotic/but i aint a ass fker/kicking ya ass/
QUICKER THEN GEORGE BUSH BREED WITH OSAMA
cut you up/serve you for dinner/im da cannabalism farmer/
JUST LIKE JEFFERY DHAMMER
you CK wanna be/street famous beggor/
I'M FKN ABOUT TO UNLEASH LIKE ARNOLD SCHWARTZENEGGER
slice you up like devon/put you in da lead role of 7TH HEAVEN
you wont wanna open your mouth X/cause i'm hitting you like a missle/
betta dig ya grave/cause there aint going to be a sequel
I'M DISAPOINTED TEARY AND DEPRESSED/but excited/
CAUSE DIS IS MY TIME/TO RIP YOUR HEART OUT YA CHEST/
wait a min/ill give you a SECOND CHANCE/
free tickets to a stripbar/so you can do your LAP DANCE
HAY/wats that you gotta go now/mammas callin ya/
awwwwwww X i think ya lying/tell da truth/
UR GOING HOME TO HOST YOUR GAY PORN SHOW.............


Hay X i couldn't stop rolling went past 20lines. Match it..

wtf is wrong with you lol u spat 33 lines jesus crist! i said 10 bars MAX fuck that shyt but ima let it slide...thats fvken retarded newbie w/e ill drop soon n im not matchn nothin i exceed haha yo i aint droppin 30 somthin lines...ull see ma drop ina lil holla bak 1

ps- u lucky i didnt DQ ya ass for that u gotta follow the rules...damn ur lucky...real lucky

you "SPIT" so much shit that ya lips "SWELL UP"/
you look like jayz sippen "NOVACAINE" outta cup/

the rhymes put you into critical condition/
so delousional ill have ya tounge ina state of repitition/

like "DR. Kevorkian" ill "HELP" you commit "SUICIDE"/
ma rhymes are like drinken poisions that make you look abnormal like "Dr Jekel and Mr Hyde"/

god damn_ ma rap flows sick/
harder to beat than a fucken iron bar or concrete brick/

ma words will "HIT" you like a "SLUG" through ya chest/
once ya hear the "POP" ya fucken heart beat will stop/

you pop more pills than baseball players on "EFEDREN"/
we all know your secret, those pills are to encrease your "ESTROGEN"/

ma words kill ya mental membrane/
leaven "BLOOD" clots in ya cranium, looken like a "USED" "TAMPON" drained/

like the army im bringen you "MAJOR PAYNE"/
goin up against me is like "DAMON" without the "WAYNES"/

shit you wrote a 33 line "book", this is a keystyle battle/
just "read" ma shyt n watch ya jaw drop and dismantle/

ma rhymes are below "sub zero", they make you "FREEZE"/
stop ya brain and make you start speaken chinese/

your rhymes come "UP" like a "SHORT" stem, i stand "TALL" like "OAK TREES"/
damn ma rhymes make you so delerious you forget ya ABC's/

ma words are "HEAVY" the "WEIGHT" of "BOLDERS"/
ma lyrics be like "SHAMPOO", rain down on you like "HEAD AND SHOULDERS"/

yo ima "BENCH PRESS" ya cofin just to "LIFT YA SPIRTS"/
you so wack "DEAF KIDS" aint even "WANNA HEAR IT"/

aight people lets get the votes up n goin holla bak 1

Firstly, lillem you have to follow the rules for the battle. Saying that you couldn't stop, had to keep rolling, doesn't make it acceptable. Other than you spitting too many lines, I did feel your verse. I thought it was one of the better ones here. X, yours was ill. You won this.

Vote - X

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thats 1-0 me lets go people more votes! holla bak 1

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lets get some votes people holla bak 1

COMMON PEOPLE STOP SLEEPIN AND VOTE PLEASE...u vote i vote on ur battles VOTEEEEES PLEASE HOLLA BAK 1

X seems like no-one wants to vote. You kicked it though i just went out of wack.

I'll keep to 20lines next battle X.

yo i thought this was a nice lil battle, i do think u got outta line wit tha bars lil but i'ma have to say x took this 1, he came alil harder.

my vote=x

cool lets go more votes ^^^ holla bAK 1