Find'n true love is as hard as find'n its mean'n...
It's this, in which what keeps us dream'n...
Fien'n, for a love that we'll never find...
True love, is all just a lie...
Shattered dreams broken from cruel reality...
A wicked love, picked out randomly....
Long'n for sumth'n that isn't there...
Us'n the word freely, wit little care...
Can't trust its intentions, or its twisted plot....
The war between love an lust is always fought...
Hard to find out if the love is true...
So the definition I'm suggest'n, is "The Way I Feel For You"...

*kinda ran through this...i just let my feel'ns out...so they might be a lil confus'n an mixed...*

respect my fellow poet/
full of pure emotions/
keep expressing truth

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Aye, i believe in true love...but i agree, it's hard to find, and even harder to define...i could try, but i'd just go into another world deep into the cattacombs of me soul n what not else....you just have to be fairly level headed, and in touch with your inner self, to realise if you have it or not...i.e. don't lie to yourself....but then, it's even mroe complex than that....but i knew...and no one else in thie world, apart form her and me could comprehend it, in the form it was in between US TWO...so it's a personal thing, see...other people can come close to depicting parts of it....buit never fully....blah!...fuck this shit, man...(RIP)....


...no further comments to make...respect...

Yeah I feel it! I peeped your piece because you have my old handle. I used to be Kevlar Gortex Tha Protecta, before this Internet stuff and before my conversion to Islam. I like your insite.
Keep on!

thanx to y'all who've peeped...any more...?

True Love...Feeling Down When The OneYouare About Is Down And Feeling High When In Their Presence And When Theyre Feeling Good...Everything Coincides And Is Realized...

Aye, that's a bit of what it is. But that's it, all just seems so understated. On the whole, it's something past words
n what not...it's just there...i dunno, maybe my case was an extreme...blah!...dunno why i keep coming back to this damn thread!....but as you said, everything coincides, like a soul mate, AND THEN SOME....

...gah!....

Are You High Or omething When Your Up On This Board
If Yu Dont Like What Im Sayin Its Understandable

What Your Saying Is Right As Well Too...
Its Hard To Define An Understand And
Difficut To Maintain WHile Doing What
Comes Naturally

your thread was pretty nice, I think alot of this feeling can come from misfortune--i think it all comes down to two things 1)right Time and Right place----peep rapture----light when you get a chance

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Who? me? Well if yes, i didn't say i do not like what you are saying. Was just adding to what you said, putting emphasis on how i believe words n what not cannot fully describe it...for me personally at the very least...it's a fucked up topic for me, so excuse me if i seem a bit 'out of it' when 'talking' about it or whatever...

..no hate here (i cant even remember disagreeing with you on this board...?!?!?)...

ummmm...ok.....upp'n.........

Love is always something we question...
Good peice.. Props and respect..

nice piece dawg keep uppin