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Old 03-26-03, 06:41 PM   #1
lillem
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HATERS NUMBER ONE

IP: 200C EEF2

Dis ryhme is dedicated to all the haters in my area n class, fuck yous.

Opener:
I aint a saint never said i wasant a sinner/
dont have to ...rap..snort smack..fuck hoes..and play mister winner
like you cats wanna speak shit/
but ya front yall actin weak
its like u cats spit to tackle fame/
spreading news bout me..buildin my banner in shame
but you know da pain i can bring you/
spread my words like anthrax...dis a chemical warfare...on a mission to kill you
i aint a dog...dont judge me by a cover/
im a soulja from my pain RIP to my brother n father/LORD LET EM rest in da hall of FAME
bitch...ass...punks....wouldn't know reign when it came/
speak behind my back betta front for d attack/
fucking your life up on smack..crack....dope...hope you die you fuckin cats
In da class you speak like ya ILL/
fronting like ya GOD on a mission to milk me...but will..you ever see da truth behind THE:...your not me.........
Miss beauty pagent...Mr i'm so trip....trying to hit on da ladies....with ya so called dick/
Excuse me Miss too good..heres a question....for first place in da BEAUTY PAGENT/
what would you do ...for DA world if ya ASS could/
WELL UMMMMM THROW A PARTY JUST FOR ME...SHOPPING SPREE...FUCK EVERYTHING I SEE....FINGER MYSELF WHEN I PEE....BE QUEEN OF DA SCHOOL....OH AND WORLD PEACE IS THAT COOL/
dont ever try to be my friend/
in a lifetime hope ya dreams fail ahead/
to words that yall spread/
you got a "F" cause ya failed in giving head/
dead last in dis race wit all ya friends
FOR MY STRUGGLES N SUICIDAL FEARS/
TOO MY CHEMICAL IMBALANCE BRINGING ME TEARS
DIS WORLD IS A PLANET OF HATERS/
I'VE SEEN MY HURT...PAIN...N COURAGE THROUGH MY AGES/
but you fucks belong in a cage...you all front with dis fake ass rage
but if yall could step..back...put down da crack..fucken wacks..strapped with a dildo no gat..look at yourself in da mirror/
YOU BE STARRING INTO DA EYES OF FAKE ASS KILLER

CLOSER
respect to mark linda n D/pedtro love all for respecting me/MARK FUCK THESE HATERS/THOU BE DEVIL CREATORS/LETS UNLESS DA POWER/LETS HELL RAIN AND SHOWER.....

MA FOR ALL YA GIVEN STRENGTH HELPING ME FIGHT MY CHEMICAL IMBALANCE/LUCKY TO HAVE YOU AND MY NUMBER ONE ILLEST GIRL L LUCIOUS LOUSIE...HUGZ FOR STICKING BY ME...BUBS J YOU NEVER BELIEVE DA TRUTH

FUCK ALL THESE RUMORS..BELEIVE WHAT YA WANT...DONT TALK SHIT N DONT FRONT/
YOUR PUSSY JUST A HOLE THEN YA AVERAGE CUNT


To da lord my heart is wit you...THANKYOU

Last edited by lillem : 03-30-03 at 05:28 AM.
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Old 03-26-03, 07:58 PM   #2
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ya gotta split this up into readable bars man cos it just looks messy and ya get the flow mixed up wen readin it. wat i could understand was nice tho good delivery in genral but a few lines need work. nice overall tho maybe work on ya vocab tho
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Old 03-26-03, 07:59 PM   #3
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Need some responds.

Holla peoples
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Old 03-26-03, 08:07 PM   #4
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yeah i was feeling what ur tryin to say but like the cat above sed u cud do with making it easier to read
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Old 03-26-03, 08:11 PM   #5
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word...i was feelin it....hard to read but i managed....stay up....1
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Old 03-30-03, 05:29 AM   #6
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JUst had to redo dis cause it was fucking my mind...People have already gave me news on dis...

but holla at da slight changes..
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