Another masterpiece...

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Though my heart was pounding, it felt silent and still;
My heart was with this woman, but I'm defiant by will;
This swine never squeeled, niether did I, I quietly kill;
I stood, and watched in awe, as the violence instilled;
The hatchet scraped her body, till no skin was in sight;
Dropped the saw, and chopped off every limb with a knife;
This massacre strains life, as I hacked at her brains;
Chopped her into rellish and then I made a stack of remains;
The sunsets, out the window, I see the purple horizon;
Outside I'm calm and peaceful, inside I'm hurt an’ I'm cryin’;
It pains me to leave this corps a specimen vile;
So I kill the dogg and toss it with the rest of the pile;
I hear Satan's cynical laughin', my sinister passion;
Makes me crave death, I thank God for clinical lapsin;
I desposed of her emains in such a whimsical fashion;
Burnt my cloths, and scorches her measly skin w/ compassion;
I'm almost finished, I move slow and as timid, as craftsmen;
The fear of gettin cought greatly, limits my actions;
Death glimmers-while-graspin' time minutes arent passin';
I'm a primitive masked man, God forgive all my actions;
I'm just a man on a mission, thoughts are animal driven;
I planned with percision, now I'm here and chantin’ your wisdom;
Cannibalism’s laws have me panickin’, wishin’;
For some support, but my mind is so satanic and crimson;
I look to the dark side, because the forces of evil;
Have lended me thier powers...my source is deceitful;
The way her corps lit; so feeble....it was morbid and lethal;
But I love to torture the people with the sorcerers’s needles;
Scorched her cerebral with a torch; stronger than demons;
I only killed her because her soul was longing for freedom;
She belonged in the cemetary, caught by the reeper;
She was tasty though, I might add: Thats honest w/ meaning;
I loved this girl so much, I handled her better;
Then most cannibals would; but this damsel was clever;
when I randomly checked her;
There was a tatoo on her neck that said "4 Ever Hanibal Lector's";

(So she did love me?....damn.....)
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damn dawg... fuk slim.. u got issues.. lol... its strate though lol holla

Thanks man...appreciate the feedback...lol

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dude that has to be one of the best rhymes i have read on open mic....that shit was ILL the whole way bro...

mad uppins

This shit was fuckin ill...i like your concepts, the last piece i read ("Isaiah") was good, but you show elevation in every song you post, and you have MMAADD skills....

Uppin this piece for 13th...

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Damn...I've been through hell...lol....i had some user name errors, so my old user name has been eraced and a I re-registered....

Anyway....

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haha some graphic stuff, but atleast it put the image in my head so nice piece, everything was good about it, flow was off in some parts or maybe i didnt see it ? ne ways..
keep spittin..
peace out...

Dope drop Apostle... Nice imagery... TIght... Peace