Im not a "rapper" who acts hardcore//
did that shit, not into it no more//
most of these so called "thugs" are juss a folk lore//
Tryin to sell drugs out there back door//
o well now your in prison//
juss cuz u wanted to live the thug vision//
look back in time wishen//
maybe i should have listened//
and i wouldnt be in this perdicaminte//
If i could have another chance it would be a heaven sent//
Do u really wanna look back and say=
like a wanna be thug is how my life was spent//

short but alright... good to see someone out here not claiming their "net-thugness"... this was alright for a keystyle, i can see what you are trying to say but you might try to send that message with a written... that way you can revise it... anyways thats just my opinion... keep rhymin