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04-01-03, 04:40 AM | #1 | ||||||
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peep this fresh rhymes
IP: 1501 77A0
trill emcee no need fo no introduction,
straight bustin, verses at yo direction, straight injection, in yo system, concerts i'm straight thugin-in-em, grab a victim n i'm straight mugin-him, lyrics start to burn yo auricular, so hot 1 bar be endin-ya, sendin-ya, to yo grave be brave, soldier hold-ya, groun carefully, i'm the lyrical bully, inflictin injuries, to enemies, straight to hell with they entaties, my shit at boilin point yours like luke warm water, i outta, ecterminate ya right now, my lyrics tight-now, metaphors n punclines are my weapons my artilery, come on my journey of lyrical elivation discovery, my negativity, will crush an emcee, instantly with less then 30 seconds of the round, mo savage then a pit bull tortuted in a pound, fuck, frontin, emcees stuntin, get caught doin that act, and get eliminated from rap, fuckin with me is fatal, verses powerful like words from god's decendants cain n abel, leavin emcees unable, to come back with a come-back.. |
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04-01-03, 05:42 AM | #2 | ||||||
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Trill dogg that was ill, another blessed one doin it for the K.I right here, man all of it was great, flow was night everything
keep spitting dogg.. peace out... |
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04-01-03, 05:53 AM | #3 | |||||||
.BeTteR ThAn YoO!.
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Yo Trill, there are some good lines in there but maybe u just gotta arrange a bit better so that u can bring out max flow, I reckon the piece is really just missin a nice, consistent flow, your improvin but man, keep it up...
Peace Out Yo!!!!
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04-01-03, 06:28 AM | #4 | ||||||
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cheers, but the thing is i wrote this in maths today in like 10 mins and no edits have been made to that
Last edited by tRiLL : 04-01-03 at 07:14 AM. |
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