this is a bit of a harder track sumthin that would break the line of heart on my album [if i ever slang one together]
theres some clips in it from bone thugs, and a few media clips, its old skool like NWA

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" Were on the scene of a double homicide with a suicide twist, tw-tw-twist "

You thought you knew me but you didnt
so dont think that for one minute
im all poetic and wont rip it
cuz ill murda, youll be my victim
you thought i was nuthin but heart
but you come to find, im all hard
Ive got instints to give ya a thrill
jump on stage and kill kill kill
and if you dont think im real
ill slang a rhyme you can phissicly feel
[music slows to a stop]
[popping voice]
lemme tell ya of a man wit a plan
not to stop till hes gotta grammy in his hand
and all his enemys turned into sand
if you dont like, fuckit everyone likes there own brand

[beat starts back up]

so stand there and hate
you cant escape ur fate
ill break ur nose bone into r brain
then laff as the blood starts to rain
im game im down for anythang
ill jump on stage and lyrikally
assasinate you mane
i dominate this music industry
every lil kid aspires to be me
not because of my phat ride, or bitches
but cuz of my phat ryhmes and my lyrics
ill drop anyone who wants my title
fuck it, yo im the american idol

[media clip]

"No new leads in this story yet, well inform you as soon as the story breaks"

my son, is gunna be 7 times doper than i was
and right now, im not allowin yall much
cuz ill tackle you and youll eat dirt fer lunch
dont get ur panties in a bunch, i gotta hunch
you thought you knew the way i flow
but you didnnt know
ill go toe to toe wit any nigga that wantsta throw
ill slit ur throat with a broken bottle
tie you to my cycle and hit the throttle
take sharp turns on purpose
wait, i havent even sctratched the surface

[media clip]

" still no breaks in this story, police have identified the shooter as 19 year old Scarface Kapone, stay tuned for more information"

you thought you knew me, you were wrong
my ryhmes will stay strong
ill smoke you like cheech and chong
" fuck it niggaz its on" - [bone clip]
if you hate u look incorect
like a nigga with blonde hair,
and blue contacts
i got blue prints to commit mortal sins
im a shoe in, but Knightshade wont admit it
o well, ill remain a free agent
cuz yall all thought you knew my flow
your dead wr-o-ng
ill get so low, ill throw u into a tree like sunny bono

[media clip]

" we have the story under raps now, Scarface Kapone came home to his wife with a nother man, shot em both then took his life into his own hands, a tragedy, definatley a tradgedy"

you expected the worst, but got the best
i putta slug into both bitches chests
no tradgedy was averted here
they shed no tears, it was fast, my bullest seared
and on da bed next to the dude and dani
a note i wrote, " YOU THOUGHT YOU KNEW ME"

Yet another great story. That was awesome shit. I'm outa RB but drop me a PM whenever you write new shit...and I'll peep it from time to time.

So yeah...good luck. Don't be doin any of that crazy shit you rhyme about. Get it out in your rhymes and take care of your son.

yeah this was alright wasn't feeling it quite as much as ur other stuff but still good
wud sound dope on a track
went off rhymes in a few places but nothin that can't b fixed
keep writting man (oh yeah and ur inbox is full)

nice rhyme it lacked a lil but i think the potential was definetly there hit me for a collab

cool yall, D y u gettin out?

a'ight.. kinda like GZA's Luminal with the news clips.. you threw alot of clips from otha songs in there too I noticed.. but worked around it so it wasn't really a bite.. the sunny bono tree line was wack tho, sounded better when slim used it... u got a pure wu-ish style to u from what I seen of ya rhymes.... uppin' dis joint f-sho.....

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i did, i didnt know slim used that line fo real the only bit line i awarely used was the bone clip, but i mighta slipped, shit o well, i peeped why

go to bitch slapped

I'm feeling this one alot more than your first post or keystyle ... well whtaever you called it lol... I've always loved story time lol OoNnEe

this is mainly for my *fans* [fgee and deception] it only fits riught if u red do you know, heart poured out nd third installment

^^^ uppin ^^^

ya it was tight shit I felt most of it it droped off a lil in the last cuple verssss but all inall it was tight. a diliciousss drop.
peace.