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Old 04-06-03, 04:20 PM   #1
L.I.N.K
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~The ILLustrative Lyricist~

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WIt this pen i illustrate writings that stimulate ya brain power to it's highest degree/
most richeous to speak words of wisdom to those that seek guidance from me/
the L.I.N.K, Lyrically Inclined to spit Notable quotables of a higher Knowledge/
rawest to spit flames til the day we face the new age apocalypse/
opposite to most when compared to commercial cas spittin herbish on wax/
claimin to spit facts but come judgement day, they have no reference of they senseless raps/
skip laps around tracks while my rhymes go the distance, shorten miles to inches/
intense by nature while others only tend to shout when mentioned/
large amounts of tension form when i recite poems of authentic intelligence/
overpowering those of artificial creations, leaving those of fake images irrelevant/
delegate to rap, founder of hiphop and all it stands for/
expand more than the average man, bring hell to those that demand war/
leave hands scorched when upcomers grip the mic i previously blazed/
needless to say, i serve up herbs daily wit my infamous wordplay/
verbs get slayed when i unload punchlines, that rip and decypher ya whole frontline/
make crews disperce wit each verse similar to dope heads runnin from 1-time/

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Old 04-06-03, 04:29 PM   #2
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WIt this pen i illustrate writings that stimulate ya brain power to it's highest degree


sry killa..but u didnt stimulate to much..u used alot of big words that didnt exactly rhyme and the lines were extremley long...i wasn't feelin it...
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Old 04-06-03, 05:08 PM   #3
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I guess Effer didn't read it right cuz shit waz tite
Flow was there and Vocab
rate dat a 4.5/5


~`UnO`~
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Old 04-06-03, 05:19 PM   #4
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Re: Re: ~The ILLustrative Lyricist~

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sry killa..but u didnt stimulate to much..u used alot of big words that didnt exactly rhyme and the lines were extremley long...i wasn't feelin it...


^^^exactly what i felt jus seemed a lil off
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Old 04-06-03, 05:34 PM   #5
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^^^exactly what i felt jus seemed a lil off


*great minds think alike *
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Old 04-06-03, 05:51 PM   #6
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ya had tha vocab but didnt kno how to use it homez.Learn tha meanin of words and when/how to use em.Stay ^
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Old 04-06-03, 06:32 PM   #7
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*yawn*
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Old 04-06-03, 07:03 PM   #8
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well its better than being basic

::Looks over at Effervescent blow her a kiss::
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