iight, here we go......

10-20 lines(5-10 bars)
first to 5 votes wins
3 is ko

both post due by wed b4 midnight.
imout
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iight play checkin in
ill post in a sec!

lyrically im rippin dis kat like Oprahs fat ass in tight jeans//
dis man couldnt spit a decent verse if he had biggie smalls genes//
notice how dis man requests 2 days 2 write a verse//
dis man iz preorderin hiz lifetyme suupply of halls, no dat wouldnt be neccessary if he didnt suc so much ballz//
i murk dis kid leavin him wit no "Ego"//
ma flow iz all good above da stem like a ganja diego//
"Ego" is a muppet, and I’m pullin the strings//
Thinking he’s fly, I’m clipping his vestigial wings//
You talk the talk but when it comes to walking you're Stephen Hawking//
Your style's limper than a gay fetus’ wrist after an abortion//
You couldn’t come off the top if you were a Jewish baby's foreskin//
And a rabbi with a craft knife had grabbed you by the japseye to make a fast slice//
It doesn’t take a genius to see, You battle me to fulfill your masochistic tendencies//
Ego, he sits in his bedseat and tugs his sub-one inch dick to these sentence schemes//
You're worth less than ten pence to me//
You’ll have to wait ten centuries to evolve to match me mentally//
But essentially, forget the fact that you're wack, I’ll overlook it
Let’s sit back and watch a documentary: Ego Unzipped//

ova...i think i may have passed da limit but wateva...lets c wha u got chump!!

ok, nice verse playa.
yo, im gonna post in a few
for now
im out
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aight play.... ( itz richie )
those are some fuckin grimey rhymes....
holy shit you fucken murdered Ego.
The jewish kid rhyme jus killed it...
5 starz

ya shit was hot plat...when you gonna post ego..damn naw j/k

damn u got skills

yo, this is gonna be a keystyle so here we go.....

ur gettin a STINGIN cuz i already STUNG YA CREW/
fuck SWINGIN, im givin ur chest the twenty one GUN SALUTE/
ur BRINGIN cold shit, cuz u know u HEATLESS/
u SINGIN "Big"'s shit, an u still dont know wut "BEEF" IS/
fuck, i'll IGNORE HIM, til i see him in the STREET/
fuck a FORUM, cuz meatloaf is the closest this cats come to BEEF/
u POSTED some bullshit an said that IT'S RAP/
i ROASTED this hot pussy that's y ur LIPS FLAP/
how is it that u could ever BOAST/
only 3 battles after 200 POST/
i gotta semi-auto for my LYRICS to spray/
u OUGHTA duck b4 my SPIRITS get u "PLAYED"/
im a HERO, thats y every day im HAILED/
an there HE GO, the football "play" that FAILED/
im so LETHAL/
ill stab u wit a NEEDLE, wit a VIRUS/
that'll give u ANTHRITUS, an make u FEEBLE/

My vote went to play.

ego: you started off hot, nice lines, I especially liked the meatloaf one. Once you got towards the end, the rhyming became inconsistant and the syllables were off.

play: You had a strong verse, all the way through. The multi's were sick and your scheme kept togother well through the whole thing.

thanks for comin out ego
peace

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

0-1, plays up
uppin more votes
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yo, ppl, wake the f*ck up!!!!
poll-0-2 im down
post- 0-1 im down

imout
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yo ppl we styll uppin votes

yo Ego da battle iz ova nice tryin though.
i win 3-0-ko!!!

close dis thread...its ova!!!