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Old 04-08-03, 01:42 AM   #1
Emcee Juggernaut
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a rap with no swearing?!?!

IP: 7FEB 4053

one day my album will drop
like water from a faucet
its not very often
that u hear an MC
that flows like me
so most likely
they wont like me
at first, and it hurts
i could write a dope verse
but its like if i dont curse
then it just wont work
listen to what i wrote first!

just listen, just listen
listen

im profound with pronouns
that every time i pronouce
you can hear what my soul sounds...like
i write in the dimlight
i put my insight
in between the lines
try to free my mind
but i'll need some time
to create my master peices
see my brain was smashed to peices
when i was on that
but now im on track
on lap, number 2, giving my youth
another go
this is the basis, dont mistake this
for just another flow
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Old 04-08-03, 01:43 AM   #2
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hey ya'll, hit me up if its worthy....peace
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Old 04-08-03, 02:44 AM   #3
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Yeah, it's good but simple and short...Oh, and I don't curse either...It's not creative...curses just fill in tha gaps where you couldn't think of anything better...because there's always something better than a curse...Keep it movin'...
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Old 04-08-03, 05:13 AM   #4
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true true linez,nice verse juggernaught,real simlpe and straight to the point type nahmean.nicely done...

bismillah
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Old 04-08-03, 07:00 AM   #5
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who ever said that 'cursing' makes a hip hop record work?? its the meaning in the song that matters not how many sware words u put in. anyway this was madd simple. you need to up ya vocab alot and ya flow wasnt that good cos ya bars were too short. ya second one slightly better than ya first verse.

ANYWAY RETURN THE FAVOUR CHECK MINE BANGKOK BUSINESS aight one
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