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Old 04-09-03, 10:39 AM   #1
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Some Other Shit

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razor blades, box cutters, realize brothers , we're engaged in age/
politics, patriots have raped colonies with rage/
northern policies stop you in a new state/
new date, as your head jerks/
step back like massages, shiatsu experts/
caught your decapitated head burst/
affidavit signed for these institues and Feds work/
actin like you know me though/
roll with plenty keys, and coded like mp3s/
known for steady speech that'll band your ass like Antonio/
holy words like Miswaks/
if you miss this talk (you cant even grasp this)/
then your kids are mistaught/
my mainfested grasp spit like Llamas ans Asses/
the reason i'm shadow dodgin/
is cuz Osama Bin Laden has been lodged in large amounts of toxins/
ready to test our fear as he walks amongst us...
by the american congress/
i speak for those thrashed in trust, with no stress/
just bust like chests/
and get the fuck outta here like bankrupt porno sets/
no bets, my steps to go slow like batteries used up/
fuck kats like feline beastialities/
and cut tracks like suicidal heroin abusers...with.../

razor blades, plagues, gernades/
a.i.d.s. get your raced erased/
off the earth, before your place is taken/
cop your hearse and stay awaken/
stop by your local Mosques, Churches and SYnagouges/
Metaphor-Phesus, this shit is institutionalized/
please help me God
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Old 04-09-03, 10:49 AM   #2
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Hmmm

this was defitnitley on some "other shit" but the piece was coo, I diggs the concept of it all usage of words was coo, and ya metties was'nt bad either overall I liked it....something I can smoke to
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Old 04-09-03, 10:53 AM   #3
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thanks yo...you should peep some of my other shit if you like complex rhymin...good lookin out...one
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Old 04-09-03, 10:59 AM   #4
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I LOVE THE WAY IT FLOWED
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Old 04-09-03, 11:02 AM   #5
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^^thanks...good looking out dunny...i replied to that battle drop you did that shit was illness...one
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Old 04-09-03, 11:09 AM   #6
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HIT ME FOR A COLLAB TWIN
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Old 04-09-03, 11:12 AM   #7
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no doubt dunny...just pm my ass namsayin and we will do some shit together namsayin...one
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Old 04-09-03, 07:19 PM   #8
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nice drop man.Kinda fell off in tha middle but it picked back up.Came ill tho,Keep postin,Stay ^
-Avi
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Old 04-10-03, 05:30 AM   #9
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^^thanks girl...that wa on some metaphoric shit namsayin...its all about complexity and metas...at least to me it is...one
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Old 04-10-03, 01:04 PM   #10
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you got wha tyou all about with that peice narc,metaphors was nice,complex as usual,just my style nahmean...propz on this nice job,
bismillah
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Old 04-10-03, 05:15 PM   #11
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yo, yo my name is ric and im here to say dont ever let me hear u say suck my dick
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Old 04-10-03, 05:56 PM   #12
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yo my name is lights im tight wit the mic i sike my oppenets out
before they pick up the mic dont look at me in the wrong way or you might have to take your last breath and never live to see the next day
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Old 04-11-03, 06:36 AM   #13
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^^no offense but you two sucked right there namsayin...those lines from you two were the wackest shit i have read...if you keep posting half assed rhymes like that i dont think you're gonna be getting positive feedback...one
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