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Old 04-10-03, 05:42 AM   #1
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Griiiiiind-Ft.Spadeballin-New Track Don't Sleep Please

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/kronichlezmusic.htm

1st-Spadeballin
Hook-Spadeballin
2nd-KroniK
Hook-Spadeballin

this is a nice track right here.......hook is kinda annoying though lol

but overall i think we did a good job on this shit

so reply to this and leave links yo.......show me some love on this

i replyed to Cassius Freestyle and Noneeds joint Ft. Some wak kid lol

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Old 04-10-03, 06:56 AM   #2
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Yo man, its not really my style, but on a lyrical level, it rhymes well and has some good lines, your verse was good I reckon, liked it better than the first..

Hit my shit up man, "At the helm of Entertainment"
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Old 04-10-03, 07:17 AM   #3
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aight i'll do that

uppin

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Old 04-10-03, 05:37 PM   #4
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Uppin......c'mon yo i don't sleep on none of ya'll shit if u ask me to peep it

show sum love dammit

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Old 04-10-03, 06:23 PM   #5
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i told u that other cat was wack lol

u outshinned in this track
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Old 04-10-03, 07:23 PM   #6
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ay I liked that second verse. That first one needs to be redone but that was aight. If y'all need some beats holla atcha boy. I got some clean ass beats and hooks, they just need some filler verses, ya know? We might be able to collaborate on something. I don't mind giving out a few beats and hooks cuz they come together like magnets in my head.
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Old 04-10-03, 10:15 PM   #7
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aight gimmie a llnk to ur page yo

i'll check it out

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Old 04-11-03, 10:20 AM   #8
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daz HOT nice shit yo da nigga at the start got lines like me
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Old 04-11-03, 06:56 PM   #9
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wasnt overly impressed wit the track or the production but lyrically it was tight ,nice dawg
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Old 04-12-03, 07:46 AM   #10
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lines were alright the chorus was terrible so was the quailty the flow were choppy on both parts wasn't really feeling this to much.
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