10 15 bars
3 a ko
4 a win
when vote do it on the poll

u spit

lets get rid of this newbie then!!!!!
yo yo
theres gonna be kayoss well there better be
after this ur raps r gonna fall apart as if they had lepressy/1
who do u think u r responding to my posts
iam gonna kill u then exercise u as a ghost/2
u ante getting away wit shit u ready to die
iam gonna kill u so quick u ante getting time to say good bye/3
u a faggit ur favourite colour is pink
ur version of hip hop is listening to nsync/4
iam on my 5th bar and u no who da best be
u shaking so much peeps thinking u got epelepsie/5
u been murderd already u fagged up dike
u wanna be like peter pan cause bitch u wear tights/6
when u hear this u wish u could play i back as if it was a vinyl
iam pissing all over this newbie as if he was a urynal/7
see iam cold as ice but hotter then a kettle
u some coward and i got balls to rob the devil/8
see iam cold at the heart but hot when iam spitting
this kids just broke into a sweat but his toes r frost bitten/9
uve been shat on uve been mugged so r.i.p
i should of told u bitch iwas out of ur league/10


change the spelling mistakes thats why i edited

when is kayoss spittin.... cuz ur shit was WACK BITCH

aight, yo







this'll be like barry bonds playin in little league
I don't need no head bitch get off your knees.
I'll hit you with a 4 ton pound of bricks
you can't fuck wit me or my click
fake thugs like you run when i go for my hip
cuz you dumb bitches aint spittin nuttin but bullshit.
you'll get smoked like a joint
cuz i'm strapped with hollow points
I roll wit my nine, not my gun i'm talkin bout my dick
so after this i'ma make you take a lick
this shit is short and sweet
i rock faggots like you to sleep.

out.

uppin 4 votes

liam took this one

vote liam
both quite wack and i'm sure liam didnt spend much time on this
anyway the flow was alright from both but the rest was wack

n dobut liam ripped him apart, the response was just too short....
I esspecially like:
iam on my 5th bar and u no who da best be
u shaking so much peeps thinking u got epelepsie

see iam cold at the heart but hot when iam spitting
this kids just broke into a sweat but his toes r frost bitten

I liked how u contrasted hot and cold twice in the rhyme also

liam difinitely won, had way better punchlines