10 bars 2-4 lines = 1 bar

aight. u spit first

yo mic check one two one is yo mic on i dont know all i hear is fucking trash even the garbage man would laugh if u call dat rap/

i dont see a battler all i see is a pussy wannabe mc/ hes a fagget try to be a thug and g /his mama gave em HIV/ i will say dis ya betta now after hooked-on-phonics now u can read/

yo u can spit but ur not ill/i bet yo daddy wished yo mama woulda been on the pill/then he wouldnt of been stuck wit u and dats 4-real/

i will slap u back N forth/u aint gonna do shit cuz u gotta enough probs wit yo ex husband taking u to court/cuz u a bastard u dont even pay support/

ill murder u and not get caught ill use ojs gun/ then what ill do is supa-mans gonna run /watch him get indited he wont have the money to have johny fight it/

ill be like a mexican and stab ya/grab ur heart out and stomp da shit/u gotta second career option ur face is a good comedy bit/

u aint neva gonna get a deal noones eva heard of ya u a busta/a stoupid ass motherfucker if u think ur girl loves u u the biggest sucka/

man i met ur crew i bet wit u guys u neva make music its one fagget orgy/nowonder yo shit is boring /thats why ur girl neva stays till the morning/


ok ill stop wit da gay jokes/ especially after this battle its murder i wrote/ make sure to go suck some dick so u can feed ur habbit for coke

you aint got no heart so just drop the fucking microphone u gonna go the rest of ur life being a rapper thats unknown

hey, vote on my battle with Conspiracy and i'll come back and vote after your shit is done

Wanna battle me, dog, ur not even ready/
That's like givin a 14 year old girl to R. Kelly/

Dog I don't even have to try to beat u/
Kinda like u and ur dick when u got a good beat to beat to//

Muthafucka I rap with a vengeance/
Assassinate u like them fools did Lincoln/
I'll make your ass stop breathin/
Like Christopher Reeves when his lung tubes start leakin//

U rappin is like Q-tip thinkin he's hot/
So I'll hit u wit that "vivrant thing" that'll make u "breathin stop"//(breath and stop)

Yo, ur life is like the Matrix/
When u seen them bullets they made u wanna move quick//

Nigga, you really wanna know what I think/
Ur rhymes passed ur ass up on shit's creek//

Wit the mic in my hand I'm illmatic/
Wreaking havoc niggas should know I'm still at it/

I wish bitch niggas would stop testing me/
Make em "say my name" like I'ma "child of destiny"// (destiny's child)

U can't stop these "Clipse" from "grindin" u unless it's "Lord willin"/
Since it's not, start diggin the grave that u fillin//

Sorry to take away the life that I gave u/
Shoulda batlle me when someone was here to save u//

Jonez Won that, with punchlines up the ass,
Good Job jonez, Thats some good shit

Supa man, dog good wordplay, but You need better combinations

I'm surprized, Aynonamous has improve since the last time i saw him... well Aynonamous had Punches, Flow, and everything else over his opponent... nice Punches BTW... you know ma vote

5-1 dog what's crackin

Dog I don't even have to try to beat u/
Kinda like u and ur dick when u got a good beat to beat to//

^^ hahaha NICE ASS PUNCh.



Anonymiz jones had a few tight punches. most were ok a few were played. supa man ur flow was kinda childish. u need to elevate. work on metaphrs and punchlines.

My VOTE goes tO . . .ANonymiz.

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8-1 from polls and reg votes and still uppin' (yep)

aiyyo Anonymiz Jonez ripped the shit out of supa-man.
This nigga should be know as "Punchlines-R-Us"

vote: Anonymiz Jonez

oooooooooowhhhheeee
Jonez seriously took this shit
Supa-man work on ya flow, and keep ya head up
CITY LIFE!!!

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That's 11 out of 12 votes fo me dog. This should be closed

Lol
Anonymiz has gotten better... but he is far from punchlines R US... he should be able to come up wit a hot line quick... but he has improved good battle Jones... good luck... lyrical godz of thy Divine Scribe'z speak... ~OnE~

post scribe: respond n reply to some of my poems...