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Old 04-18-03, 06:41 PM   #1
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crit this

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Yo, they done shot that boy down like a dog in the street/
Left him smelly, man fuck that, roll em over take that fellas pellet/
You ain't never heard a motherfucker spit like this/
Not even puff, and that nigga there made crazy hits/
Every few years a nigga come who crazy hot/
I'm the next best thing since Biggie and Pac/
Now I'm sayin this shit slow, so you don't miss it/
Don't be a statistic, my jewels from the district/
Stay with my biscuit, touch mines and get twisted/
Son I'm off the meter, my mind locked on crime/
See I'm tired of all these rappin niggas dyin to shine/
And I'm tired of fiends askin for a dime for nine/
Hearing this next punch line from me, may sound strange/
You sit your 5-dollar ass down, before I make change/
Yo the sale went stale, caught em real bad/

Fresh out the jail, shit is really real/
Niggas is still in jail/
and I pray they don't tell/
20-man inditement/
my lawyer gotta fight this/
Niggas know/
I ain't never pressed for dough/
And niggas know, I don't serve nobody I don't know/


This is for all you 300+ post bitches who think they know something about this rap game.. if you went through this and found some problems.. this is one of 50's underground hits off his "Guess who's back" album, he's the number 1 rapper right now.. and probably will be for a year or two to come.. once again im saying if you found problems with this verse right here tell it to 50's ballin ass

just proven a point that most of the niggas on here talk big shit and that's just it, they talk big shit


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Old 04-18-03, 10:38 PM   #2
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man will u shut da Fuck up alredy damn u just a bitch straiht up bitch, fuckin pussy, rap r get da fuck out, if not ill battle ur punk ass then well see whos writin ojneword lil bitch
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Old 04-18-03, 11:00 PM   #3
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one word: jackass
does that make you feel like the cocksucking bitch assed panty waste you are?

You post a 50 verse tryin to prove a meaningless point, because the fact is that people post verses here so that they'll be critiqued, by either newbies or "300+ post bitches" as you called them. Just because you don't agree with what they say, or what how they act, doesn't give you authority to spam the forums with bullshit and stupid replies to verses you didn't even read.
Even if 50 is the number 1 rapper right now, doesn't mean he always writes stuff thats meaningful. A good beat and a good image'll sell albums, hell, look at Nelly. A classic no talent artist, makin millions.
Think it through before you post stupid shit.
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Old 04-19-03, 02:34 AM   #4
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i hate 50...and nelly,no talent cats gaining massive fame off commericalisation,television and media destroys us form the soul...breaks down our mind into dollar signs nahmean,aint a good sign when a cat liek this comes along,amn posting an old 50 verse,i dont care,about 50 straight up i dont feel him,i never have,aint my type of shit,you might idolize the motherfucker,but foreal no one gives a fcuk what you think...so what this ones an underround hit...so what?...hes the number one rapper right now...whats that supposed to mean,who gives a fcuk foreal....he got a good beat and an aiight flow on one song that appealed to the masses of cats like your self that have no talent and want to be ill,thats all that made him the number one cat at the moment,and jsut coz your the m=numbe rone cat dont mean your ill anyway,and foreal if your pissed off with cats that thikn they know somehting aboutthis rap game or however you put it,then why the fuck are you on this site?why do you even listen to rap music?one of the biggest factors of rap music is the fact that most cats think they are better then everyone else and brag,thats jsut part of this shit....straight up that verse was bullsht anyway,i dont care if was a hit or not,i didnt feel it one bit,ive heard heaps of 50`s shit and ive never felt it,its jsut my opinion,and if your coming on here ot tell these cats to get a life and stop complaining wich i think your dong,then why are you bothereing?your wasting your time telling cats that..coz they dont give a fuck what you think,fucking drop verse or go foreal cat,noone wants to know waht you think...its all bullshit.
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Old 04-19-03, 04:36 AM   #5
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wtf???man why the fuck did this i cant even think of a curse good enough post this...this kat should go back to jail and keep droppin the soap cuz his verbal skills suck like his biatch on my genitals namsayin...post some real shit dunny...that by far is the wackest drop i have ever heard...you need to work on everythin and stop givin props to puff daddy (the fuck was that about)...wahid
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Old 04-19-03, 04:51 AM   #6
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sorry about this free post but DIZNAM Ate you went all out on this kat lol...wahid
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Old 04-19-03, 04:55 AM   #7
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hold up...i just read all of this drop and it wasnt even his own shit...what the fuck are you doin biting peoples shit and posting it in here...sayin 300+ post bitches dont know shit???dawg you done fucked up right there...i'd rip you a new orphasis any day...so start posting your own shit in here yo, or get your soiled panty ass the fuck outta here like bankrupt porno sets namsayin...fuckin idiot
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Old 04-19-03, 06:16 AM   #8
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haha narc,verse is a 50 cent drop,ahhaha prove the point the guy cant rap
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back a tyou with the damn ahha
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Old 04-19-03, 08:02 AM   #9
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One Word:Blah

Three More Words:This Was Wack

Alot More Words:How Can You Be The Number One Rapper When You Can Barely Open Your Mouth?

A Couple More Words:50 Is Wack And You Must Be Seeing As You Didn't Even Post One Of Your Own Scripts.

More Words While Im At It:Kid..... Don't Try And Spread Knowledge, When You Clearly Have None.
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Old 04-19-03, 08:38 AM   #10
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This is for all you 300+ post bitches who think they know something about this rap



LOL The Thing is These '''300+ Bitches''' Know More About The Rap Game Then Yoo Boy... But Yoor The 30+ Bitch So Shut The Fuck Up!!!!


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this is one of 50's underground hits off his "Guess who's back" album, he's the number 1 rapper right now.. and probably will be for a year or two to come.. once again im saying if you found problems with this verse right here tell it to 50's ballin ass



HaHaHa Yeh Coz 50 is So Underground.... Bitch Please.... He Had a Few Albums Which Fell Off n Now That He's With Shady/Aftermath He Got All Popular... He Needed Help Gettin ta Where He is.... Where Would He Be If Shady/Aftermath Didn't Support His Buck Tooth Ass?!?


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just proven a point that most of the niggas on here talk big shit and that's just it, they talk big shit



AtLeast ''Most Of These Niggas'' Know Where ta Post.... n Don't Bite Wack Shit.... If Ya Gunna Bite Junior... Make Sure It's Sumink Worth Readin...
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Old 04-19-03, 08:42 AM   #11
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^^hahahahahaha...
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Old 04-19-03, 11:13 AM   #12
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one word: ha
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Old 04-19-03, 12:17 PM   #13
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this one word shit is buggin...you must have mote to say the ha...or have you gotten all embarresed coz youve been shown how fucking stupid you are...
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Old 04-19-03, 09:07 PM   #14
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thank u yall please tell this wak ass bitch to just get da fuck out, lil bitch posts 50 cent shit....phhhh
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Old 04-21-03, 01:07 PM   #15
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Come on doggy! how the hell can you come and bomb my shit and you sittin here distibutin this bullshit to the people,b. What the fuck is your problem.Niccas who see this shyt go and look at the shyt he tried to diss and tell me how you feel. I like good critisism but when haters like him speak it's repulsive.Holla back you bitin ass faggot and stay off my dick.
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