no less than 20 bars

yo i'll vote after its done, go peep mine against brothaz and inspector....

Blac Haze, dogg, you should have neva come out the closet,
fuckin around with plz.B.leave your mind you definetely lost it, the lines... you've crossed it/
bout to show you the repercussions of fuckin with a true lyricist,
seriously you cant be serious have you lost ya mind or gone dilerious???/
i know you fearin and hearin this furious flow that'll leave you in a puddle of red,
right after i drop top ya forehead, wont stop buckin until theres more dead/
ya whole team i'm splittin spleens, your rhyme scheme is like soul food with out the corn bread/
i was born and bred to be the best, dump bodies in riveens it seems that nothin less will come out of this test/
1 more dead emcee that couldnt quite see the unseen,
crept into sons dream, i might spare this cat if son comes clean/
sike!!!... theres soo much excitement of lookin into ya eyes watchin U watch Me type this,
composition,
if you was my son you Still couldnt follow in my likeness i'm the nicest/
emcee on the scene wont stop squeezin till my clips empty dont envy,
envious ones get hit whether your friendly or enemy........

With lyrics stronger then titanium, and 2 shots to the cranium their aint not stopping my game
Popping these niggas letting em know my name betting they just want to take aim
Why this nigga even post the shit hes trying to boast
Leave you engrossed in the seacoast and lying in your watery grave as a ghost
Spent like 50 cent this aint right, this aint what I meant I just wanted a battle not a fight
But I will get my fighting gear, not out of fear but out of spite
This aint a battle of wit, It’s a battle of how you spit
Cuz if I used my wit then you would have to omit the shit you tried to spit
Take your best shot and I’ll terminate you like Control Alt Delete
aint no point in rhyming with the elite better start trying your retreat
With the click clock from my shotty the tick tock on your body is in a deadlock
Bout to fasten it like a closed casket, for being an overdosed misfit without a glock
i'll grab my 9 then fire 11 bullets sending you to heaven like it was 9/11

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come on B just Leave, Plz :P

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yea right dude....... you had like 1 or 2 hot lines but that aint enuff....



uppin for votes

both need help with flow and elevating past siplistic ryhme structures

neither had any personals

I'ma have to vote draw here

i vote plz b leave, better vocab

BOTH WAS HOT BUT PLZ HAD MORE SHIT 2 SAY N BETA WORD PLAY
VOTE=PLZ B LEAVE

uppin for more votes.........