10 - 20 lines
3-0 ko
no hater/crew votes
no BITING

you spit first

u battlin or what

CLOSE THIS

you didnt tell me u fuck

u spit first if u want a battle

Dear Diary
i am spitin against this chump with a vengence//
caus this guy here cant even rap in a sentence//
i dont even no why i am waisting my time//
this fuckin chump should be staring a pantomime//
but in the meantime i will just sit here and rhyme//
up this rap ladder i continue to climb//
and you a witness of this shit i bin spittin//
you in my buisness i should be reaching out and hittin//
you with your little clan, group, crew wotever you wana call it//
you a fuckin hipocrite you dont really fit//
you rappin againt me you gona shit up there style//
pick up your cell phone and 999 you should dial//
tell the nice lady on the other side//
could i have the hospital plz, i think i am infertile//
have i look at my profile,infact i think i'am a peodophile//
neva mid any way its your fuckin choice.//
you wana be a bitch all your lfe then i will sit down and rejoce//

not bad started strong but got abit weak near the end.

mic check >>12<<

hello MANNY here u go have a present/
its a 15 yr old lyrical genius adolesent/
this aint no ak, its a smith & wesson/
i'm not here to rap, ive cum to teach u a lesson/
i aint black, but i deserve a platnum plaque,/
ur shit is slack, so ama treat u like the leader of Iraq/
walk up behind u and shove a Mac in your Back/
here man >BANG< have that/
now does that feel, wasnt that emmbasasing/
all your life you dreamed that your last thing/
wud b to have a rap that hit like a BEE sting/
you just tryna be like rap legend Dr. Dre/
and i'd love to sit here all day and play/
and let loose with one of my lyrical sprays/
slam u on ur back until i break ur vertibrea/
but dont worry i'll rearange ur skeleton/
help u with your rap and see some elevation/
but now im sending you to rehabilitation/
cuz u read all this and its to much infomation/

wow gud shit scotty

MANNY i think callin your self a peado gets u no where

manny votes 4 himself and he bit an eminem song to try out in Explicit Assasinz

uppin

uppin votes plzzzzzz

come on vote

http://63.219.149.14/forum/showthre...&threadid=41530

drop a vote on that and i'll vote on this