You see infactuations through my eyes
I close all doors with your lies
Through my soul my spirit sleeps
Burrying me far inside to weep
I'm without breath without life
I'm on the edge 6 more feet until I die
Nothingness takes over living your lie
All is gone like feathers that fly
My memories hang on with all might
Hold on to the lord and hold on tight
Grasp me before I come undone
Bless my heart to run
Create me from the dust make me real
Show pitiful graces what it is to feel
Falling inside and only can save me
If only you could see
I'm right in front of you hidding
You all living a lie
So save me so we wont die
We all have a speech impetiment there nothing to understand
Let your cranium go and take my hand
Perfect by nature heavens best
All hanging on to heavens blessed
Uploaded and Reloaded never was mistaken for the rest
Death is our only mistake being put to the test
I consume the trust and digest the lies
While forsaken angels fall from the cry's
Never again shall I drink this blessing from outer lust
Instead I will learn to educate and trust
Emotions fake the facts and consumptions turn to reality
Fate is all we have in all this insanity
You confused your thought and combusted your love
Fly with me to heaven come above
See the graces that fill your heart
Watch lunatics tear them apart
You let me go, You didn't want to save me
Not out of the millions you see
This is on you, your dreams will eat at you inside
The one person who died could have been the one who kept you alive...

Sorry about spelling.. kind of drunk if you know what I mean... yea.. OoNnEe

tight as expected

man this femcee always be droppin hot shit and deep in meaning...like always its was a pleasure reading a piece with sense in it....beautifully written...wahid

thanks for the replies..upping

Uploaded and Reloaded never was mistaken for the rest
Death is our only mistake being put to the test
I consume the trust and digest the lies
While forsaken angels fall from the cry's
Never again shall I drink this blessing from outer lust
Instead I will learn to educate and trust



Yes that was some deep flowetry...keep spittin girl

"We all have a speech impetiment there nothing to understand
Let your cranium go and take my hand
Perfect by nature heavens best
All hanging on to heavens blessed"

tight drop!

dis is dope, nice flow, strangly deep, all in all it was tight, respect.

wtf??? who is zainy??? go back to the play pin, newbie. Of course you showin respect, you should show respect to everyone.

Angelic, nice flow, as always....I feel like I should say somethin bad about it, so your head won't swell, but I couldn't find anything. We miss you in rb chat ;-) peace

awwwwww I miss you too lol..I'll come visit for a little bit lol.. girl been busy as hell. OoNnEe Thanks for all the replies

yo, you always droppin' hot rhymes.. too emotional all the time tho, I want to see you write a joke piece.. your flow and wordplay was str8.. I bet you'd rip it up in a funny rhyme.. holla babes.. 1

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thanks ya know.. I'll get on that.. I actually do make some pretty tight funny one's lol. OoNnEe

that shit was nice as hell. return the favor on mine "How Many"

Nice flow angelic

THAT WAS DEEP CHECK THIS OUT TOO.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5001#post395001