herd the noncentz-MAKENG KNOW CENTZ got you pist-and made your fan list-multiple posted death wish~es- from fans that hope you cease to exsist-
talk the game,put my time in this-drank my eye sight in MAD DOG and never lost focus-
see the industree is a slut- you get in, what you put in ,but if she dont put out im leaver her fucked-
a kamikozee with bi~polar-for rappers that frost bite,knock your wisdom out and leave you bleeding through behind your molars-
ademic-m.c.'s become anemic-pitting your phattest lines against mines cause i drain rap and ream it-mop your career up,perfect in paragraph paraphrased strategic- killen in 5 lines and make you para~palegic-
i keep rhymes un~chambered un~locked- chambered on some thug shit and do a drive bye on my writers block-
you can try as hard as you can-
(if he tried any harder he'd shit his pants)jouste from the mouth and use my tongue for a lance- you couldn't write an ill verse through prosteticc implants- cloned with CANNIBUS fingerprints and hands- cause you a club banger with a gerbil in your rectom to help you dance-
put the game in the choke hold-no matter if you out of state or local-my skillz surpass you even in gospel with jesus lacing your vocals-
151 with no chases-surrounded by so mant biters i should copywrite prescriptions for braces-
in battles rappers get outshined like TURBO SUPRAS-VS LANCERS-
spit ill shit and give myself colon cancer-
sold your soul to battle me and still took and "L"-now you get hit with one line,5words, and sentenced to hell-
no me ves means you cant see me- your the antonymn for the synonymn of what an m.c.-
a metaphorical oricle in the circumfrence incircled in flow-if you rappers get "BRAINS" LIKE YOU CLAIM-why you sound like a dumb hoe-
i leave every one of you un corked-couldnt spit a 100 bars if you named every bar in new york-
spit flow- no dam can hold-complex liek disembeling a car manifold-
got live-with META 5- to get my fan base energized-now im doing the same solo to disrespect you after youv'e died...

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some decent shit in there...as aalways a pleasure reading your writtens...

my skillz surpass you even in gospel with jesus lacing your vocals-

that was my favorite line...but overall the drop was hot shit like curry excrement...8.5/10...wahid

hola at me what needs work

that was nice, i enjoyed it. the rhyme scheme seemd complex (at least to me) so that was nice.

sold your soul to battle me and still took and "L"-now you get hit with one line,5words, and sentenced to hell-
(if he tried any harder he'd shit his pants)jouste from the mouth and use my tongue for a lance-

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I'M ILLER THAN YOU
"Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne

"I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill

"Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools
On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll

"Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9"

www.soundclick.com/fo'trill

1 more thing. whos the chic in the photo?

__________________
I'M ILLER THAN YOU
"Im bout to make it famous, so you can take you J-O-B and shove up your anus" -Techn9ne

"I knew god hated me, created me, and threw me on a planet thats afraid of me"-Ill Bill

"Hit bongs bigger than indoor pools
On treez like ewoks screamin "Endor Rules"-Fo'tryll

"Ur only alive till ur dead"-Royce 5'9"

www.soundclick.com/fo'trill

the chick is a friend off migente named cindy just wanted to add some art in words lol anyways thank you for reading that means alot.

that was my fav. line aswell.... very nice drop... we'll collab again soon...

"i keep rhymes un~chambered un~locked- chambered on some thug shit and do a drive bye on my writers block-" << now why can't I have a drive by on my writers block damnit!! Nice peice Mr..
Could you explain the chick at the bottom..she doesn't match lol... but okes.. we can work on spelling I think?? lol... OoNnEe

Illness dunz..

keep droppin bombs on these mafuckaz..

peace
-1-

UPPIN THANK

WORDED PERFECTLY WORD PERFECT

"spit ill shit, and give yourself colon cancer"
sick

GET AT ME WORD
J-Stacks

I AM A PRODEGE, SO FUCK ALL THE FAKERS WHOM TARGET ME

yo that was ill really liked the muties, and the metas, that was an i'll drop keep rhymin, and stop elivatin



hit my shit up its called "Remaining Unrecognized Part 1"
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8513#post398513

UPPIN AND THANKS TO YOU BOTH

Straight vicious kid... wordplay, flow, length, topic. All of it was tight... good joint. Holla.