yo this one time thing that happened to ma dad he told me bout it, he tha guy describin it, i just wrote the flow

one morning 7 a m woken by ma door
knock afta knock couldnt take tha sound no more
opened up tha door to face a boi bout the same age
picture in his hand and eyes burnin full o rage
can you help me cause im lookin for ma little gurl
se bout this high brown eye black curls
went missin yesterday at around three oclock
and ever since then iv been lookin for her non stop
yo man im sorry but she dont even look familliar
I hope ya find her man, the best o luck to ya
I tried to shut that door but he walked rite into ma crib
the dude was to upset so i offered him to sit
He told me all about his beautiful little daughter
I felly felt for him and i prayed that he would find her
all i think bout is her being kidnapped but end up i just freak all out
yo fone the cops man theyll help you find out where she at
naw man a waste of time they dont even bother
they just laf atchu and say 'you sure the gurls yo daughter'
Yo man thats whicked cmon andpull yourself together
tell you what let me get dressed ill help you find her
all day I roamed tha streets wit ma new partner
but nothin did we find and it was gettin darker
the boys hope for finding her was gettin worse by the minute
there was nothing else to do so we dicided just to quit it
Next day talking to my gurl and what did a hear
she told a story bout a little gurl whod dissappeared
turned out it was her mother who had killed her
headed out for mexico in her boyfriends car
what made it worse was that she split wit her own cousin
ma head was full of questions man they just kept buzzin
next day i dressed and went to see ma new boi
to find him hangin by his throat hung by a chord line
beside him lay a letter for *anyone who reads this*
Yo sorry man, my crew, my peeps life was full of whack shit



never forget tha day he knocked upon ma door frame
another life taken to feed the ghettos cruel game

baffled by tha topic
but tha way it seems ta me is that ur stuck in tha old school style
but it was aigh

this drop was extremely Whack , , i wasnt feelin any point of it ,,

i dont kno... tha flow started off strong, but u lost me toward da middle....?????, i dont kno, u new ta RB so i'll give u that, neva give up, jus keep postin and u'll only get betta.....

thanks man, yo i apreciate tha critism, ma reason was it happened around me so i felt it, but i aint sure if i got it cross to u

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