yo a spat this shit when a was drunk lol plus my boy just split...he went wit ma best pal (fuckin asshole) still aint ova his though (dammit he was HOT)

here tha shit go

Im comin you wont see me but I be thre
Be tha one at tha bar swingin her hair
Battin her eyes and poutin her lips
You be tha one sweatin when I start swingin ma hips
Hypnotisin yo bodylike a snake charmer
Im a black knight wit no armour
My eyes be ma weapons so don’t look directly
You might end up handin yo wallet and you keys to car ova ta me
I like ta make you think you got me unda tha thumb
Then I hit you wit tha suga leavin yo brain numb
The black Widow striking only when the timin b right
You looking straight into ma eyes and don’t put up a fite
But I hate to sound sleazy, tease me a don’t want it if it that easy
You gotta make me think you putting up wit sometin
That way I don’t feel bad for ya when I b stealin you bling
Then a leave you high and dry wit no one ta kill tha burn
Next time you will kno betta cause im ta one who helped ya learn
It aint just da men who got tha charms and tha ay wit tha ladies
We got it too and if you knock us up you be payin fo tha babies
So fo every gurl in tha town who got cheated wit a whore
One of us b born ta even out tha score
We all around ya nigga so be carefull
Cause when we leave ya all alone don’t want a nigga actin hurtfull
……..Its just payback time

He was tha one who got me inta rap and shit like that ... tha am thankful for

yo theyre a line out of tupac in there so dont go rage at me lol i kno it there!

not bad, not good, my verdict is medioker.. you had some good lines but mostly filler.. flow was in-consistent and there wasn't much wordplay to keep interest.... stay up tho girl, you got skillz

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yo thanks man lol keep in mind a wuz drunk lol but always open ta ta critism