Third Open Mic, I expect you won't feel it once again.
It's just what came out of the pen. Some babbling of myself, mostly just a bold message for the female graduates out there going off to college. Don't do silly shit just because nobody's watching, your peers can be the strictest teacher you've ever had.



Wax works when we wonder this museum/
Muse and ponder on my life in ruin/
I'm a shoe-in to get in on anything you're doing/
Who wins when I pin my own shoulders under life's water/
Like a group rape holler: "hold her harder!"/
When they mate in after liquor melts the ice on which you skate, thin/
Why do you shoot shit with no permit in your history to reveal mysterys to this pervert/
Neither of you deserve it, no need to PERMIT him in/
This type, conditioned to hitting his own kin/
The type to make us ask what state we're in/

My plates clean, thank the Lord!/
Divine Inspiration absorbed?.../
I swore in his name, oh, but with it... shit, I'm through!/
I was in vain, then profane, but check two bars back, now I ask is it the fault of me or YOU?/
Ah, shattered dreams.../
That fragmented mirror in which pieces of your stagnent self are seen/

Do You remember what I was tryin'a hammer at/
Before the tangent sprung the circle and my stammer spat?/
Aha! Take on me, I was gonna suggest how to work your life out/
Before they merk you out of sight, now/
How can you say chau/
As you walk into a pad fulla dudes never known to you before now?/
Never met? Call it a hunch, in fact I might bet on it/
They've spiked the punch in order to get their pet on tits/
Tee-hee-hee, where is your sweattah?/
"Dog, her eyes rolled back—but she aint got no mo wettah!"
Pass out quick or they'll pass out the Kick Cola, roll your sweet ass over/
And crush your can, slap hands and scream "Who's the man?!"/
Or maybe crunk a Punch sub, toss you in the tub/
Just to see the unmeasurable pleasurables that reside/
In getting tail that ain't yet revived/
And fuck just your can full of worms, your opening a jar of readily spreadible VD/
The edible aftermath of giving head to strangers while on E/
Kid, you've got the gift of glee, let's mend the rift between/
Here's my wall-et, take it to the mall; it's ample for a shopping spree/
That's cheap next to the cost of therapy from a night of sodomy/
And it's easier to produce my pennies than observe the struggling strife of life limited by HIV/
It might not shock your parents, but my two cents makes much more sense/

fin.

Feedback furiously encouraged. I'm sure I'll be upping the hell out of it.

Great, I get to up it already! =D

this is Ill for ur third open mic , ,, ,, Nice wordplay , , most femcees in here are whack , , , but you're one of the Best

DAMN, MOS' IMPRESSIVE MA, I THOUGHT YOU WAS A MAN....DAMN...SUCH SKILL..

Wow, holy fucking shit.
The props are nice and all, but... why the fuck am I a girl now?
Ah, only something this fucked up could happen to me.
And we all know femcees get a 50% increase in props over males anyways... so... fuck yall. Did I really come across as being a woman in this? Good god.

Upping.

^^lmao...


was a aiigth spit laryan...i felt a couple of times the shit dropped a little,but it picked up again real quick no doubt it was still nice...i thoguht you had a kinda mos def flow approach yanahmean??but i liekd the topic no doubt...some shit is to confusing to work out,like why a girl can fuck all she wants and be a slut,and a guy can do the exact same thing and its accepted,shit like that i dont know how to comphrehend,but no doubt i enjoyed reading this....


And it's easier to produce my pennies than observe the struggling strife of life limited by HIV/
It might not shock your parents, but my two cents makes much more sense/

^^ no doubt shits true...alt of my friends were stupid and got the shit and are real restricted now for being stupid and shit...but thats hteir own problems nahmean......

shit was nice...dunno why its gettin slept on,but shit has a way of being slept on here for ages nahmean...keep posting and one day catsll awake...

Thanks ate.
Uppin again! Come come now!

nodoubt check my shit out tell me what you think...

bismillah

Told ya ^^^
yo this was far beyond what I expected, but the rhyme scheme, an my personal "audio" delivery...

Yes here it comes...

Reminded me of fuckin Sage...
But i also saw a few of tha bars, an the intro totally threw ya femcee look into it... um yeah but I worked wit ya,
I dont think you a chick.. (Still lookin at Andrea>>)

Say word. Uppin yet again.

Mmm, Andrea.

I have to up, I'm on page 2. Cmon, I try to drop comment on stuff. If it was terrible I'd be cool, but it seems people actually enjoyed this one.

LaRyan Shabaz u r correct, some femcees get more props then emcees cuse of they gender.............................
Like a group rape holler: "hold her harder!"/ lol

yo "Why do you shoot shit with no permit in your history to reveal mysterys to this pervert/
Neither of you deserve it" that like sorta doesnt rhyme that good i mean u could've said ...perverted n deserve-it goes betta, but what i've heard is like chick rappers actually can rhyme words betta n that chick of that group Federalz she can rhyme mad words together.......................
And fuck just your can full of worms, your opening a jar of readily spreadible VD/
The edible aftermath of giving head to strangers while on E/ that was a good one...........

the topic was original...the wordplay was pretty good.....the vocab was good in about 67.8991 and a half of the lines............well its good for ur 3rd open mic keep postin n like next time be sure to use spell check