just a quick verse i made when i was in the shower....


dudes is quick to hate me
good and evil debate me
cause i spit that hott s-h-i-t
you can't lie to me just because you despise me
try to deny me the right to privacy
so i can independently destroy any one of my enemies
i mentally inscribe my name in they memory
so they infinatentally remember me
and if they try to step to me i'll chop off they feet
my lyrics hard enough to knock off my teeth
i could rock off the beat and still be the illest to speak
pretty much slaughterin cows cause i'm killin the beef
i'm real with the streets and i unexpectedly
uppercut MCs who underestimate me
see, i spit the rythm with precision
containin skillz that could make twism look sick some
to me, rappers couldn't be equal even if it was socialism
what am i suppose to diss em? complainin that i'm too basic
well you need to face it
no matter the complexity i'm still iller than hospital patients
i've lost all my paticence, here you want enhanced grammar?
i'll create lactic acid concludin in a drastic accident
i'm fantastic at destroy wack shit. what not satisfied?
well i'll bring it greasy like the kind in which fat is fried
fuck it...bring it in my house where many cats have died....

this was a tight drop


word...


8/10



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LunkHead......why does ur post have splitknot killin fred durst lol..............
decent drop........started off pretty bad then u sorta picked it up and tehn u lost it agin near the end........vocab was only good near the middle........decent drop, next time try n make edits

thanks for the feedback...anyone else?

Nice drop fam...............u got to hook me up wit that SIG...lol


Yo wordplay was deffinitly there and contend wus mad


SICK

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anyone else?

yo link that was a nice drop~! i was feeling it !
overall i guve u a 9/10

retrn da favor at my battle sway vs the re of chrounus ...im up 2 to 0 ! so comon dwag hit it up its not that great of a battle tho but w/e

Lunk that was a tight drop. I was really fellin it from start to finish. I am lookin forward to seein some more shit like this.

thanks guys...anyone else? and if you want me too peep your shit drop the link....

nice as alwayz keep em coming

uppin