15-20 lines max

lets go

I am who I am, you just can't change me
No matter what you do, you can't take the hood out me
People been around me for years, don't know shit about me
Dedicated, like Muslims makin' solate
People steady try to make me into somethin' I'm not
That's why I had to cut the grass, so I could see the snakes
Copped the house on the hill so I could see the lakes
What you thought? I'm a girl, couldn't make it alone
Time to turn the heat up and get back in the zone
One day my hairs orange, the next day it's green
The trendsetter's back on your TV screen


I'd rather be dead and rich than broke and livin'
Without rap, I probably woulda been sellin' dope in prison
With some Vera Wang khakis and Noltey chucks
Suckin' the warden's dick in the back of the bus
But God made me what I am today
So I say things ya'll afraid to say
Just 'cause you got a head start that don't make you strongest
He who burns last, burns the longest
Fuck what they say about me
Cuz im livin the dreams of all my homies
the Queen of hawaii, lets get this straight,
im about to smack yalls cuz im from 808

i know it may be more than 20 lines
but fuck it .................................................. ..............................................

bitch what you blabblin about, you aint from the hood
you live in a fuckin rich ass neiborhood
dont try and claim you black, bitch iam about give you a bitch slap
look at this you fuckin bitch writing down your dis, fuckin get real and battle the real way, fuck it this is what I got to say:
your a fuckin slut, yeah i bet you like to take it up the butt!
givin head to the warden, wigga please you aint even seen a penatentary!!!
so shut the fuck up and sit down in your white ass classroom seat, bitch admitt it you in defeat

Alright both sucked. given the fac that kanak came with it up on the spot it was okay, but both need SERIOUS elevation.


look at this you fuckin bitch writing down your dis, fuckin get real and battle the real way, fuck it this is what I got to say:

^^best line from kanak


What you thought? I'm a girl, couldn't make it alone
Time to turn the heat up and get back in the zone

^^best line from flyin

Tips: flyin--u need to stop rappin about ur "hard" life and start dissin
kanak--u need to ge more creative with ur word play and flow beter


i wont vote on this cuz i know u 2, will let the others decide

these newbs dont know wtf they doin. hit this battle and thyll hit urs votes ^^^^........................................

well both verses were equally wak but kanak actually dropped a battle verse.flyhigh's verse was more like a song...

vote-Kanak

les go guys votes ^^^^^^^^^ uppin on this shit. lol. give these newbs some feedback 2. we need a winner for braggin rights

lol man this was like me when i joined......but worse both were wack but im gonna give it to kanak cuz yeah his was half a battle verse but the other one wasnt't a song it was more like a mc donalds order

yeh both were weak but so were we all at sum stage. both need 2 work on ur punches, wordplay, flow etc. this shit will come as u get more experience. i'm votin 4 KaNaK_13 coz like the others said, his was a battle verse. good luck.