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Old 05-19-03, 05:33 PM   #1
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its unlikely you like me, fight me...
cant catch this, im lightly light speed...
so bite me, my gats are pistols...
tha John Travolta tha way i can rap to disco...
stop talkin' like u pimpin' it, livin' it up...
nigga'z run ya block, you just givin' it up...
and check my history, im tha hardest out...
tha rest can't spit, i'll tear an artist mouth...
know something? if i catch a hoe frontin'...
i'll grab tha shotti, 'pump it up' like Joe Buddens...

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Old 05-19-03, 05:34 PM   #2
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This was Aight dawg ,,,,,,,,,,,,,, return da favour http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=48119
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Old 05-19-03, 05:51 PM   #3
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so u want us too rap like u , , u want us too rap bout hoes , discos, and u want us to use simple lyrics like u
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Old 05-19-03, 09:15 PM   #4
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it was streight... i guess jus not my style... make sure there are CLEAR connections between each line... if ur shit dont make sense no one is gonna "waste" their time reading or listing to it...
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Old 05-19-03, 10:46 PM   #5
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come on bash, whats with all the hating? respect me, im doing my thing and you doing yours... peace
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Old 05-20-03, 06:06 AM   #6
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you rap to disco????????...ill...i wanna hear that ahha...itd be weird as fuck ahah.....sounds like an idea....it was simple,and the john travolta didnt make to much sense to me,it was aiight,but i mean the gangsta put me off,try doing somethign other then gangsta rap...actually,gangsta rap over disco beat...ahahhaha....i wanna hear it....god damn itd be ill...ahhaha....and a video...all thugged out doin some saturday night fever shit on one of those multi clolour disco floors...itd be crazy ahahhaa
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Old 05-20-03, 01:57 PM   #7
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i said John Travolta because i just seen a movie of him working inna Disco club and everything, i think he was supposedly tha best dancer or what not, thats why i said John Travolta... thanx for tha critique... well appreciated...
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